Vase

Bulbous, flat, keel-like ridge, and in other shapes I see you,
Curved or carved; you shine painted in red, green, purple, or blue;
As the rainbow is placed splendidly on bone china clay,
With many musing and mourning moments, you swing and sway...!

Roses, lilies, tulips, jasmines... dancing in the cool breeze,
You can contain floral species of the skies and the seas;
Never even a moment, you seem to discriminate,
Flower from flowers, based on differences, small or great...!

A fountain of water for the flowers, trimmed and adorned,
You stand by coal-black coffins of rich or poor who are mourned;
A gorgeous and glamorous demonstration of marriage,
You decorate dazzlingly valiant soldier's carriage...!

Symbolizing plentiful wealth and lavish luxury,
Indian goddess, Vasudhara's endless treasury;
An icon of self-exploration and self-expression,
You are a portion of any art-lovers possession...!

Even when you're broken, blooms you hold with satiation,
Enhancing existential elegance and elation;
Owing your acts, optimism flows in me like flawless streams,
Not nightmares, heavens, and angels, nowadays, fill my dreams...!


19 April 2023
Writing Challenge - 'V' Words Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France
Rhymes Checked At: Rhyme Zone
Syllables Checked At: How Many Syllables
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ayantika Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 10:27 AM
Amazingly Descriptive! Congratulations on your win... :)
La France Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 5:32 AM
Christuraj, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge, congratulations !
Volumes Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 9:05 AM
This poem is packed with wonderful description and enlightened passages galore. Beautifully written. Congratulations on your win.
Andresen Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 3:01 AM
- Described so beautifully... congratulations on a great win, Alex :) -
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April 23, 2023 at 12:25 AM
Lovely poetry Christurai, vases are beautiful on display or filled with flowers to brighten the day. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
Alex Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 12:49 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
George Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 10:58 PM
Wonderful poem Chris ! Great description of the vase. Really loved it. Congratulations !
Alex Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 12:49 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Goldsmith Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 2:13 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Vase" is a beautiful write. Love your line, "Roses, lilies, tulips, jasmines... dancing in the cool breeze," and they do. Have a blessed weekend.......
Alex Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 12:49 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Y. Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 11:25 AM
Hi Christuraj, Your descriptions invoked such a lovely picture in my mind. Well done. Congratulations on your win. Have a nice day and weekend:-) Alexis
Alex Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 12:50 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 19, 2023 at 5:41 AM
Dear Christuraj, what an amazing description of "Vase"! Your brilliant choice of words, your stunning images sway me away! Definitely a Fave for me. BW ~ Mala
Alex Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 12:50 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
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