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Vase

Bulbous, flat, keel-like ridge, and in other shapes I see you, Curved or carved; you shine painted in red, green, purple, or blue; As the rainbow is placed splendidly on bone china clay, With many musing and mourning moments, you swing and sway...! Roses, lilies, tulips, jasmines... dancing in the cool breeze, You can contain floral species of the skies and the seas; Never even a moment, you seem to discriminate, Flower from flowers, based on differences, small or great...! A fountain of water for the flowers, trimmed and adorned, You stand by coal-black coffins of rich or poor who are mourned; A gorgeous and glamorous demonstration of marriage, You decorate dazzlingly valiant soldier's carriage...! Symbolizing plentiful wealth and lavish luxury, Indian goddess, Vasudhara's endless treasury; An icon of self-exploration and self-expression, You are a portion of any art-lovers possession...! Even when you're broken, blooms you hold with satiation, Enhancing existential elegance and elation; Owing your acts, optimism flows in me like flawless streams, Not nightmares, heavens, and angels, nowadays, fill my dreams...! 19 April 2023 Writing Challenge - 'V' Words Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Rhymes Checked At: Rhyme Zone Syllables Checked At: How Many Syllables

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Date: 4/24/2023 10:27:00 AM
Amazingly Descriptive! Congratulations on your win... :)
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Date: 4/24/2023 5:32:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge, congratulations !
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Date: 4/23/2023 9:05:00 AM
This poem is packed with wonderful description and enlightened passages galore. Beautifully written. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 4/23/2023 3:01:00 AM
- Described so beautifully... congratulations on a great win, Alex :) -
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Date: 4/23/2023 12:25:00 AM
Lovely poetry Christurai, vases are beautiful on display or filled with flowers to brighten the day. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/23/2023 12:49:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 4/22/2023 10:58:00 PM
Wonderful poem Chris ! Great description of the vase. Really loved it. Congratulations !
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/23/2023 12:49:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 4/22/2023 2:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Vase" is a beautiful write. Love your line, "Roses, lilies, tulips, jasmines... dancing in the cool breeze," and they do. Have a blessed weekend.......
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/23/2023 12:49:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 4/22/2023 11:25:00 AM
Hi Christuraj, Your descriptions invoked such a lovely picture in my mind. Well done. Congratulations on your win. Have a nice day and weekend:-) Alexis
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/23/2023 12:50:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 4/19/2023 5:41:00 AM
Dear Christuraj, what an amazing description of "Vase"! Your brilliant choice of words, your stunning images sway me away! Definitely a Fave for me. BW ~ Mala
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Date: 4/23/2023 12:50:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

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