Notes About The Poem

Vantage Point

How strange it must seem
when each thing becomes clearer
seen from a distance…

Perhaps the eyes have more time
to see every point of view

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1/19/16   Contest: "Syllables of Wisdom"
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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January 29, 2016 at 8:38 PM
CARRIE, Congratulations on your "Syllables of Wisdom 3 WIN." Hugs. LINDA -
Dietrich Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 7:21 PM
Congrats, Carrie, I knew it was bound for a good win.
A  Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 12:29 PM
CARRIE, congratulations on your Syllables of Wisdom 3 win. *SKAT*
A. Sharma Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 4:30 AM
Congrats on ur very wise winning write Carrie! Great tanka!
Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 9:11 PM
a profound one, Carrie. Very much for Wisdom contest.
Gorelick Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 8:26 PM
wonderful Carrie...BG
Konos Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 8:04 PM
WHOA! You must carry that hammer and nail with you everywhere you go! Stunning Carrie.....as ...U S U A L
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