Vantage Point

Life trickled through an hourglass of hurt

Oozing not soothing a nectar of stagnation

He turned the pivot upside and downward

But the aperture never shifted its focus


Narrow and confined he felt trapped inside

Squeezed from outside and within the pain

A kaleidoscope of constricted reflections

Or a rushing mirage on a twisted horizon 


He had to shed the load on his shoulders

Trim the drippings of foul shaped remains

Crash the distorted mirror into mere shards

Cut loose from expectations’s compression


Over endless time he began to understand

Surrender requested a change of perspective

And thus he suspended both ends of the timer

From the wild tree of life grappling for meaning


He seized the right angle and remained still

For a succession of a few tranquil moments 

Mesmerized he cradled himself from below

Closed his sad eyes and floated above himself


The world flowed on its own without pressure

Began to gather momentum as quietude shaped

A constant reminder that outlooks may change

When seizing the core rather than flawed outlines


When he attempted to measure his progress with

Formulae equations and axioms the centre reverted

To the unwanted chronograph of crushing oppression

And reminded him that letting go meant not to hold on


14th May 2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 5/16/2020 9:24:00 AM
Looking through a lens we view the world from a unique yet somehow detached perspective. The pain and beauty of it all.
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Date: 5/14/2020 12:39:00 PM
This is really picturesque while it lets me think that letting go might not just be liberating but enlightening as well. I had to read it twice to completely submerge myself in it while I could relate. Thank you for writing this piece. :)
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Date: 5/14/2020 8:35:00 AM
U took me on a ride, even if a mountain climber's last climb/fall, it was not bumpy, but rather serene. Because of acceptance. ThanX Kai, I need to re-read. Well-crafted offering, here. shalom en totsiens my vriend.
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Date: 5/14/2020 8:35:00 AM
First, I thought a photographer (or spy)?
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