Get Your Premium Membership

Vantage Point

Life trickled through an hourglass of hurt Oozing not soothing a nectar of stagnation He turned the pivot upside and downward But the aperture never shifted its focus Narrow and confined he felt trapped inside Squeezed from outside and within the pain A kaleidoscope of constricted reflections Or a rushing mirage on a twisted horizon He had to shed the load on his shoulders Trim the drippings of foul shaped remains Crash the distorted mirror into mere shards Cut loose from expectations’s compression Over endless time he began to understand Surrender requested a change of perspective And thus he suspended both ends of the timer From the wild tree of life grappling for meaning He seized the right angle and remained still For a succession of a few tranquil moments Mesmerized he cradled himself from below Closed his sad eyes and floated above himself The world flowed on its own without pressure Began to gather momentum as quietude shaped A constant reminder that outlooks may change When seizing the core rather than flawed outlines When he attempted to measure his progress with Formulae equations and axioms the centre reverted To the unwanted chronograph of crushing oppression And reminded him that letting go meant not to hold on 14th May 2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/16/2020 9:24:00 AM
Looking through a lens we view the world from a unique yet somehow detached perspective. The pain and beauty of it all.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/14/2020 12:39:00 PM
This is really picturesque while it lets me think that letting go might not just be liberating but enlightening as well. I had to read it twice to completely submerge myself in it while I could relate. Thank you for writing this piece. :)
Login to Reply
Date: 5/14/2020 8:35:00 AM
U took me on a ride, even if a mountain climber's last climb/fall, it was not bumpy, but rather serene. Because of acceptance. ThanX Kai, I need to re-read. Well-crafted offering, here. shalom en totsiens my vriend.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/14/2020 8:35:00 AM
First, I thought a photographer (or spy)?
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things