VANITIES-TRANSFORMATION

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THESE ARE OPEN(organic) VERSES using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretation unique to the moment

VANITIES a pageant an interaction in thedesired direction distinguished dazzling. & radiant elusive & shifting overwhelming with a potential shimmering cloud streaming with serene light TRANSFORMATION peerless &monumental in magnitude a kind of desire ego on conquest to diffuse light a visible facade raw & exposed so original & anonymous but still intimate &vulnerable aspiring enthusing the complicit to imperceptibly embellish & complicate the posture

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