VANITIES-TRANSFORMATION
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THESE ARE OPEN(organic) VERSES using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretation unique to the moment
VANITIES
a pageant
an
interaction
in
thedesired
direction
distinguished
dazzling. & radiant
elusive
& shifting
overwhelming
with
a
potential
shimmering
cloud
streaming
with
serene
light
TRANSFORMATION
peerless
&monumental
in
magnitude
a kind
of desire
ego
on conquest
to
diffuse
light
a visible
facade
raw & exposed
so
original
&
anonymous
but
still
intimate
&vulnerable
aspiring
enthusing
the complicit
to
imperceptibly
embellish
&
complicate
the
posture
Copyright © Brian Strand | Year Posted 2023
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