VANITIES-TRANSFORMATION

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THESE ARE OPEN(organic) VERSES using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretation unique to the moment

VANITIES
a pageant
an
 interaction
in
thedesired
  direction
distinguished
dazzling. &  radiant
elusive
  & shifting
overwhelming
with
a
potential
 shimmering
cloud
streaming
with
serene
  light


TRANSFORMATION
peerless
&monumental
in
   magnitude
a kind
  of desire
ego
 on conquest
to
diffuse
  light
a visible
facade
raw & exposed
so
original
&
anonymous
but
still
 intimate
&vulnerable
aspiring
enthusing
the complicit
to
imperceptibly
embellish
&
complicate
the
   posture

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