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Exquisitely composed poised in the sun flick of white tail soft shafts of light late summer sun Motionless- moored to a sea of tall meadow grass A broken spell conveyed in the breeze... a haze of unwell a snap of a twig a rustle of leaves moment's unease Wariness, eyes lifted from grazing darkening skies Day's shadow dwells fraught with unease Taunting of trees taut muscles, seize ready to flee Rounded eyes mirrored glass fresh scent of harm sense of alarm One moment exquisitely composed- Another moment honed ...composed... dashed into shadows exquisitely closed
______________________________ 5/19/15 For Thomas Martin's Contest "Show, Don't Tell"

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Date: 5/25/2015 3:09:00 PM
What an eye catching beauty you have created in every line of your sweet wonderful write dear friend. A picture in which one can feel the sounds and smells and the alarms. Great picturesque write and congrats on your well deserving win. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor
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Date: 5/25/2015 2:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely win, dear Carrie!! :D :D
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Date: 5/24/2015 3:25:00 PM
Carrie, Congrats on your awesome win @-> Always & Forever LINDA
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Date: 5/22/2015 9:20:00 AM
Carrie Congs on your Poem Loved the imaging in it, so elegant Nice work fellow Bard, Hugs
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Date: 5/21/2015 11:45:00 PM
wow, Carrie. this to me is exactly what the purpose of Show don't Tell was all about. Good to see this one a winner on your birthday!! Congrats.
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Date: 5/21/2015 7:13:00 PM
Happy Birthday Carrie... Plus, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! Forever *SKAT*
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Carrie Richards
Date: 5/21/2015 7:36:00 PM
Thank you very much, Skat !!
Date: 5/21/2015 2:18:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Carrie I REALLY loved this one:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/20/2015 6:03:00 AM
Carrie, beautiful in every way, 7, and thanks for visiting my poem today
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Date: 5/20/2015 5:08:00 AM
simply exquisite Carrie - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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