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Vanishing Act

Exquisitely composed poised in the sun flick of white tail soft shafts of light late summer sun Motionless- moored to a sea of tall meadow grass A broken spell conveyed in the breeze... a haze of unwell a snap of a twig a rustle of leaves moment's unease Wariness, eyes lifted from grazing darkening skies Day's shadow dwells fraught with unease Taunting of trees taut muscles, seize ready to flee Rounded eyes mirrored glass fresh scent of harm sense of alarm One moment exquisitely composed- Another moment honed ...composed... dashed into shadows exquisitely closed
______________________________ 5/19/15 For Thomas Martin's Contest "Show, Don't Tell"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kapoor Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 3:09 PM
What an eye catching beauty you have created in every line of your sweet wonderful write dear friend. A picture in which one can feel the sounds and smells and the alarms. Great picturesque write and congrats on your well deserving win. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor
Rv Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 2:23 AM
Congratulations on your lovely win, dear Carrie!! :D :D
A   Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 3:25 PM
Carrie, Congrats on your awesome win @-> Always & Forever LINDA
Oule Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 9:20 AM
Carrie Congs on your Poem Loved the imaging in it, so elegant Nice work fellow Bard, Hugs
Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 11:45 PM
wow, Carrie. this to me is exactly what the purpose of Show don't Tell was all about. Good to see this one a winner on your birthday!! Congrats.
A  Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 7:13 PM
Happy Birthday Carrie... Plus, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! Forever *SKAT*
Richards Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 7:36 PM
Thank you very much, Skat !!
Allison Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 2:18 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Carrie I REALLY loved this one:-) Hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 6:03 AM
Carrie, beautiful in every way, 7, and thanks for visiting my poem today
Allison Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 5:08 AM
simply exquisite Carrie - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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