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VANISHING ACT

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ words linger like mist~ soft echoes reshape the air then vanish, somehow
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Gauthier Avatar
December 6, 2025 at 5:39 AM
so sweet ~
Hind Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 5:21 PM
A beautiful poem <3
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 5:36 PM
thank you, dear Paige, hugs, Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 2:36 AM
A pretty pleasing jumble of images. Great.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 5:36 PM
awww, thank you, Victor. Appreciate your visit today
George Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 7:30 PM
Words and mist linger for sometime, then vanish. Is this not a haiku?
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 5:37 PM
maybe so...sometimes I overthink the difference between a senyru and haiku. Thanks for visiting, hugs, Sara
Jones Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 6:29 PM
Nicely said.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 5:37 PM
thanks for your kindness
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