Vanished Into the Blue

Grandma's misty blue eyes  sparkled
A small smile lingered on her tiny soft lips
When I seated on her sapphire blue satin bed
Her powdery blue boudoir always wove magic
Like snow and sky romancing behind netted curtains
My decade old eyes were arrested by 
Her sapphire glittering on her finger
It seemed nothing less a robin's blue egg
Her dainty fingers in slow motion
Clicked her casket open like abracadabra.
My excited spirits surged with her treasures 
Was sure they must have been 
Stolen from Aladdin's cave
She clasped her dozens of stringed solitaires
Like lighted stars around my blue veined neck
Her matching tiara on my head was pinned
She slowly took off her solid turquoise ocean 
From her finger and kept it in my hands
She kissed me whispering it was mine
But I would have to grow up first
We shared many beautiful days
Slowly granny was becoming weaker
Dreams turned into nightmares
My granny was not responding 
The whole large family laid her to rest
Granny and her world of treasures 
Vanished into the blue



January 13, 2016
Contest: Into The Blue
Sponsor: Anthony Slausen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/26/2016 9:49:00 PM
BALVEEN, congrats on your fine win. XOX - LINDA
Login to Reply
Cheema Avatar
Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/26/2016 10:24:00 PM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 1/14/2016 9:27:00 PM
Balveen, love your touching poem well deserved win; Congratulations on your win!
Login to Reply
Cheema Avatar
Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/15/2016 10:13:00 AM
Such sweet words Eve! Thanks!
Date: 1/14/2016 9:15:00 PM
Balveen, Congrats on your Into The Blue win. ** SKAT **
Login to Reply
Cheema Avatar
Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/15/2016 10:14:00 AM
Thanks Skat!
Date: 1/14/2016 7:35:00 PM
Such a lovely, endearing poem about your Grandma, Balveen. Congratulations on your nice placement in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
Login to Reply
Cheema Avatar
Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/15/2016 10:15:00 AM
Ummmm memories left.Thanks Sandra!
Date: 1/14/2016 7:09:00 PM
Congrats on your win in the contest Balveen! *smiles* -luloo
Login to Reply
Cheema Avatar
Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/16/2016 10:28:00 AM
Thanks Luloo!
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter