Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

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Vanished

my mind wanders 
in the dark of night
the silence thick as glue
i had hopes of you
i had dreams of us
all that's in the past
vanished with the moon
and the ghost of you



AP: 3rd place 2021

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Caren Krutsinger March 11, 2021 at 1:40 PM So poignant, sad and true, Line. Line Gauthier March 11, 2021 at 6:06 PM Thanks, Caren ~

Tom Cunningham March 11, 2021 at 1:38 PM The night is the worst when you are alone when thoughts flash through your mind. Your pain will ease in time but your happy memories won't. Tom Line Gauthier March 11, 2021 at 6:07 PM Thanks for your lovely message, Tom ~

Jan Allison March 11, 2021 at 1:23 PM aww Line you must miss him so much, the words 'silence thick as glue' is so so descriptive and i am sure others can relate to the sense of loneliness you feel. hugs Jan xx Line Gauthier March 11, 2021 at 6:07 PM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Jan ~