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my mind wanders in the dark of night the silence thick as glue i had hopes of you i had dreams of us all that's in the past vanished with the moon and the ghost of you AP: 3rd place 2021 Posted on March 11, 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/11/2021 1:40:00 PM

So poignant, sad and true, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/11/2021 6:06:00 PM

Thanks, Caren ~

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/11/2021 1:38:00 PM

The night is the worst when you are alone when thoughts flash through your mind. Your pain will ease in time but your happy memories won't. Tom

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/11/2021 6:07:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely message, Tom ~

Jan Allison

Date: 3/11/2021 1:23:00 PM

aww Line you must miss him so much, the words 'silence thick as glue' is so so descriptive and i am sure others can relate to the sense of loneliness you feel. hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/11/2021 6:07:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Jan ~