Vanished

Vanished one silent moment horses upon distant hills empty prairie breeze Robert J. Lindley, 5-02-2018 Haiku

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Paul Callus

Date: 5/6/2018 4:27:00 AM

A striking moment in time, Robert...short, but very expressive. Regards // paul

Robert Lindley
Date: 5/6/2018 10:28:00 AM

So true my good friend. I look back at history of the Native Americans, my own bloodline, and I see so much tragedy , misery, deception used against them. Yet truth is this nation would not have existed to save this world twice-WW1 AND WW2, if they had not been forced to give way and let it become the powerful world force history showed clearly it became. Imagine if we had not existed and Hitler had gotten his way.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/2/2018 12:58:00 PM

A lovely visual. Seems so far away, with no hoof beat. The senses working except for sound! Nice!

Robert Lindley
Date: 5/3/2018 6:13:00 AM

Thank you my friend. The mind picks up more visually, when there is no sounds. Keen insight..

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/2/2018 7:43:00 AM

wish I was there <3

Robert Lindley
Date: 5/3/2018 6:11:00 AM

Thank you my friend. A wish that I wish I could grant and share with you..