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Vanish

Face to face body leaning Clothes flying fast to the ground Breath becoming loud and quick Disappear in love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/4/2011 11:31:00 AM
A wonderful write! Every verse is a favorite. Good luck in the contest, it is a winner to me. Caryl
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Date: 1/3/2011 5:58:00 PM
Not a lot of words here, but they place the reader in a vivid vicarious experience. This serves as a fine example of a dodoitsu poem.
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