Vanish

Face to face body leaning
Clothes flying fast to the ground
Breath becoming loud and quick
Disappear in love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Muzzey Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 11:31 AM
A wonderful write! Every verse is a favorite. Good luck in the contest, it is a winner to me. Caryl
Pettit Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 5:58 PM
Not a lot of words here, but they place the reader in a vivid vicarious experience. This serves as a fine example of a dodoitsu poem.
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