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Vampiric Dawn

The lilac haze of Dawn creeps up, With the stealth of a vampire. Bleeding glistening red droplets into The blue-black veined forest And to the monochromatic hills beyond.
~I dissected and reworded Deborah Guzzi's poem Vampiric Dawn~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/30/2010 12:46:00 PM
wow, I aM not sure if I read vampiric dawn, but this really is awesome!! congrats. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/30/2010 5:27:00 AM
Congratulations Tirzah on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Critcise Me". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/29/2010 10:30:00 PM
Congratu7lations,Tirzah on your success in Deborah's contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/29/2010 10:16:00 AM
Nice! I, also, have a lifelong passion for vamps and werewolves!
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Date: 7/25/2010 4:24:00 PM
Wonderful.. good luck with this entry.. better check the forms required for the contest.. Haiku or Concrete I thought I read but could be she added Personification.. this is really awesome Tirzah.. good luck in Debbie's contest.. with luv..
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Date: 7/24/2010 7:52:00 PM
AWESOME JOB ON THIS WRITE, ENJOYD THE READ-SKAT
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