Vampire

Climbs through the window
Tiptoes towards the large bed
Leans over the girl
Prepares to bite her soft throat
She’s already dead – that sucks!

for Nancy's contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
October 11, 2011 at 10:54 AM
Congratulations on your poetry placing in Nancy's contest Jack. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
October 10, 2011 at 10:37 PM
oh Jack am so happy to congratulate u on this one luv.. a grand winner and unique write my friend... awesome... enjoy..
Jones Avatar
October 10, 2011 at 9:38 PM
Oh, man... like, i put myself in his shoes... and can't imagine ANYTHING suckier! Dig it, jack, and preesh your presence. Beauty day to ya. Namaste~N
Sweetheart Avatar
October 10, 2011 at 6:48 PM
amazing piece Jack.. I so luv this one.. suspense and drama..good luck in Nancy's contest ..this is top notch..
Gorelick Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 10:37 PM
Great work...I must admit..it made me laugh with goulish delight...lol.BG
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October 9, 2011 at 2:21 PM
Jack, a perfect months for vampires... thanks for the smile ... Maybe the cat is alive... Ha ha.. wonder.. who got to her first... Good luck in the contest,..p.d
Kendrick Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 2:20 PM
I guess Dacular got there first...I like the surprise ending..Reads like a winner with the double meaning of the word..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
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