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Vampire

Vile creature of the night;
vice unquenched, sees her, the
victim, innocent, warm;
veins lush with blood. He feeds
vacates, leaves behind a
vapid ashen corpse; her
vital signs fade to naught.

Copyright © Terry Miller | Year Posted 2023

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Terry Flood Date: 10/2/2023 3:02:00 PM Well, that chilled me bones… cheers for that… have you seen the price of electrickery lately? A fine, nerve jangling win, Terry. Congrats (belatedly) Login to Reply Terry Miller Date: 10/24/2023 3:43:00 AM Thank you Terry

Laura Leiser Date: 9/28/2023 6:27:00 PM Chilly, scary and especially loved the last line! Congrats on your win, Terry! Login to Reply Terry Miller Date: 10/24/2023 3:44:00 AM Thank you Laura

Sam Kauffman Date: 9/28/2023 10:51:00 AM So well expressed, Terry, with original and innovative images that flow through the veins of this Pleiades! Congratulations! Blessings! Cheers! Login to Reply Terry Miller Date: 10/24/2023 3:44:00 AM Thank you Sam for your very kind words

Janice Canerdy Date: 9/27/2023 7:22:00 PM Really well done, Terry. CONGRATS on your win! Janice Login to Reply Terry Miller Date: 10/24/2023 3:45:00 AM Thank you Janice

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 9/27/2023 10:57:00 AM A terrific vampire poem! Congratulations on your win, Terry. :) Login to Reply Terry Miller Date: 10/24/2023 3:45:00 AM Thank you so very much Evelyn

Valsa George Date: 9/27/2023 9:58:00 AM Once again back to your great pleiades with congratulations, Terry! Login to Reply Terry Miller Date: 10/24/2023 3:45:00 AM Thank you Valsa

Alexis Y. Date: 9/27/2023 8:36:00 AM Hi Terry, I don't know how I missed this, good “Pleiade” on a vampire. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-)Alexis Login to Reply Terry Miller Date: 10/24/2023 3:46:00 AM Thank you Alexis

Joseph May Date: 9/27/2023 6:10:00 AM Very nicely written Terry, Congrats on your win Login to Reply Terry Miller Date: 9/27/2023 7:25:00 AM Thank you Joseph, for the high placement, and for running the contest.

Speaks Volumes Date: 9/21/2023 8:20:00 AM Excellent Pleiades Terry, cant fault it. Love it. Login to Reply Terry Miller Date: 9/22/2023 5:27:00 AM Thank you SV

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/21/2023 2:32:00 AM - Yes, an ugly creature ... well described, Terry :) - GL in the contest :) - Login to Reply Terry Miller Date: 9/22/2023 5:28:00 AM Thank you.

Valsa George Date: 9/20/2023 4:31:00 AM "Leaves behind a vapid ashen corpse"! Terrifying ! Great Pleiades and a beautiful entry for the contest. All the Best Terry ! Login to Reply Terry Miller Date: 10/24/2023 3:46:00 AM Thank you Valsa I always appreciate your kind comments