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Valleys of Lucidity

Sweet smells of musky green love hang high in the ceiling close to were we are an altitude high hazy still state laughs of swellness rain down close to where we never dwell, sober and unswayed it's hard to stand still in the rain but heavens bliss is a blanket of innocence red view in the rear view -lights flash sweet bird softly land birch blue is anew as life is aglow, aglow, aglow all around me is all I know please don't tell me I should go outside it is getting late policeman listen don't you know people grow old waiting on their own lives to unfold I want answers to loosen their hold on secrecy let them dance with me waltzing away a ticket that's crisp as autumn is handed to me last of him I hope to see, on to another steep fall into valleys of lucidity COPYRIGHT @ NANCY BECKMAN

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Date: 2/18/2019 1:56:00 PM
This is a brilliantly written poem!! I love the style and the way it was made. Thanks for sharing on here! -JWE
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Nancy Beckman
Date: 2/18/2019 6:21:00 PM
I'm glad you like it! I am reading a lot of different forms of poetry and feel closer to developing a solid style! Thanks for the feedback :)
Date: 12/30/2018 10:53:00 AM
You write like a poet who is lucid and aware of many things at the same time, I love that . I hope to read more of your great poetry, Have a wonderful day, dear one.
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Nancy Beckman
Date: 12/30/2018 5:37:00 PM
Thanks! Many more poems to come :)