Valley In the High Country

A constant vein of nature’s blood cascading rock and sand,
Flushing grains of dislodged mud. The beat in a mountain band,
Currawongs sing melody. Black Cockies rasping call;
The whispering breeze that shakes the trees, near a waterfall.

Sassafras and twisted ti-tree display a rippling shadow,
Mosses mingling with lichens where the sunlight doesn't show,
Blackwood and Lilly Pilly trunks, struggling for the light,
Lost is the canopy, when mist rolls in a billowed eerie white.

Where there's always a river through a valley in the high country,
There's always something there that takes my breath away from me
along the banks by the shimmer, pristine life is shrouding me,
Walking this river, through a valley in the high country.

The flit is there, sharp eyes note, in camouflage a glistening eye,
A Ground Thrush as still as stone watching me go walking by,
The rustle of the leaves are gentle, attracts a fleeting glance
of a disappearing rodent. Instinct breeds no games of chance.

The reason I am walking here, with times eternal strain,
I find no battle with my mind. Up here the world lives sane,
Life and death hold constant beauty, complimenting every stage.
Slow is change that's left alone, even when the waters rage.

Where there's always a river through a valley in the high country,
There's always something there that takes my breath away from me
along the banks by the shimmer, pristine life is shrouding me,
Walking this river, through a valley in the high country.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/20/2015 3:16:00 PM
I can smell the dampness and the artistic sweep of your words create a satisfying natural vision....mmm peaceful. Grateful for you. SuZ
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 12/2/2015 8:20:00 PM
G'day Suzanne... thank you for reading Suzanne. I just love the atmosphere and bird sound in the pristine mountain valleys; lyrebirds, whipbirds, and golden whistlers have calls I can never forget - Lindsay
Date: 11/11/2015 9:38:00 PM
MAGNIFICENT POETRY MY FRIEND!! A super 7 and adding this poem to my fav list.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 11/13/2015 7:17:00 PM
Hello Robert... thanks for your support again. Wonnangatta Station in the high country was the inspiration for this poem. A great place to camp - Lindsay
Date: 10/10/2015 8:09:00 AM
Beautiful write my friend. Just seeing a river around here would be something. All I've got is see and fields of wheat. Loving the change in weather. I trust that you are too.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 10/19/2015 7:38:00 PM
G'day Scott... we're not getting any rain at all and I see in parts of the Wimmera they're baling the crops as the heads are poor. The high country is just beautiful in the valleys - thanks mate - Lindsay
Date: 10/5/2015 5:55:00 PM
You can write funny and you can write elegant beauty! Amazing!!
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 10/10/2015 12:54:00 AM
Hello Andrea... many of us on this site put up surprises, but yes, nature and humour are faves - catch you soon Andrea - Lindsay
Date: 10/4/2015 2:32:00 PM
Lindsay, you poem leaves me with a serene sense of gratitude for our beautiful evolving planet. I always enjoy reading poems like this beauty! #7
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 10/10/2015 12:48:00 AM
Hello Connie... thanks for your gracious comment. Thankfully there are still many places to ease tensions in busy lives but they must be respected to remain so - catch you soon Connie - Lindsay
Date: 10/4/2015 9:07:00 AM
Lindsay, there are still these places for us, and there is beauty all around us if we look carefully enough. This is a a remarkable description of nature's grace. It makes me glad to be alive.
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Date: 10/10/2015 12:43:00 AM
That's right Duke, and it's imperative that these pockets of natural beauty are preserved - thanks mate - Lindsay
Date: 10/3/2015 7:02:00 PM
Bloody awesome isn't it. I know exactly what you are referring to as I have experienced that very same peace and tranquility. Loved your write Lindsay.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 10/10/2015 12:40:00 AM
G'day Mark... it's a wonderful feeling being in unspoilt country and just observing. Thanks for commenting Mark - Lindsay
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