Notes About The Poem

Valley

Down there where life flows
            as a river to sail on,
       the rich valley emerges with
     its beauty to be contemplated
           in all the different ways.

      Huge prairies to feed mouths,     
          large woods to listen to
      the music of the invisible ones.

      Small streams of clear waters
            for children to play in.
 
      Up there in the mountains,
        you can watch the valley
         changing with the light.

      As when we close our eyes
            to look for peace.
      We can see that big valley
       to make us stronger inside.
     

04/19/2023
Constance La France
Writing Challenge - 'V' Words Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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La France Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 5:42 AM
Maria, thank you so much for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge !
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 6:15 AM
Thank you Constance. Have a nice day
Dietrich Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 8:20 AM
Love this one . I live in a valley too although it's all suburbs now. Congrats on the win
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 9:56 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Congratulations on your win in the Contest...Maria. Nice poem.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 4:37 AM
Thank you so much Alfonso. Same to you. Hugs
Andresen Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 1:33 AM
- Congratulations on your contest win, Maria :) - hugs
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 1:51 AM
Thank you Sunshine. Congratulations to you too. Great poem yours. Have a nice Sunday
Y. Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 12:02 PM
Hi Maria. Congrats on your HM. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 1:15 PM
Thanks. Same to you. Hugs
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 20, 2023 at 4:03 PM
Hello Maria, oh what a lovely scene you painted in this poem. Enjoy your evening my friend./Darlene\
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 21, 2023 at 5:03 AM
Hello Maria, You are welcome. Yes we will talk later. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
April 21, 2023 at 12:44 AM
Hello Darlene. Thank you. Write you soon. Take care. Hugs
Andresen Avatar
April 20, 2023 at 12:52 PM
- Maria, yes I can see and hear it ... and almost smell it :) - A lovely poem :) - All the best :) - hugs
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
April 20, 2023 at 12:55 PM
Good evening Sunshine. Thank you. Hugs
Rolland Avatar
April 19, 2023 at 7:27 PM
beautiful poem, a moment of peace, in front of this quiet valley, a lovely penning
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
April 20, 2023 at 12:36 AM
Thank you Yann. Hugs
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