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" HEARTS IN LOVE " MY PHOTO, ©

May be an image of flower and nature

Valentines Wishes

Oh, Cupid,

Winged son of Venus,

You,

God of immortal love,

Listen to my plea:

I beg you 

Your sharpest arrows for me

To prepare

For

Your unparallel archery

On my

Aching for her love heart to practice.

Be 

As accurate as never before,

I  Implore you,

Oh, divine master of our hearts,  

Because

I would certainly die at once,

If

Your target, you happen to

Miss!









© Demetrios Trifiatis
    02 February 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Y. Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 4:38 PM
WoW! Demetrios, What a heartfelt declaration of love for Valentine’s Day. I agree with Richard. It reads like a Hallmark card. I enjoyed the read my friend. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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February 4, 2021 at 7:48 AM
This is so sweet lovely and romantic Demetrios. God bless. ~ Ani
Lamoureux Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 6:44 AM
Hallmark stand aside, Demetrios is in the house. I think Cupid is blushing. Well expressed Demetrios. ;0)
Horsman Avatar
February 3, 2021 at 9:32 PM
Write on, Demetrios, love the mythology touch. Cupid would be proud of your wonderous valentine poem...Stay Safe my friend.
Ball Avatar
February 3, 2021 at 11:26 AM
Lovely Demetrios. And as always the picture is so beautiful. Nicely done. God Bless, JB
Kauffman Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 12:04 PM
Delightful ode anchored in mythology for the present. Hope you are well my friend.
Trifiatis Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 2:24 PM
Thank you, Sam, for reminding us of Greek Mythology! Blessing my friend!
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February 2, 2021 at 11:23 AM
- A beautiful prayer, my friend :) - They best wishes for Valentin's :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 2:21 PM
Yes, it is a beautiful prayer for love. May the entire world pray for it, so we stop wars! Thank you, dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx
Romios Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 8:45 AM
Wow, Demetrios! How great your verse plus gorgeous flowers! Thank you Panagiota (California)
Trifiatis Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 2:01 PM
Thak you dearest, Panagiota for your gracious visit and comment! Blessings!
Cunningham Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 7:53 AM
Very appropriate for valentines day Demetrios, I would say that in your case Cupid never missed. Tom
Trifiatis Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 12:27 PM
My friend Tom, since Cupid is Greek-born, I had some inside help! Hahaha. Thank you for your gracious visit and comment! Stay safe!
Pandit Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 6:40 AM
Lovely plea my friend--like a prayer. Magnificent colors in your photo.
Trifiatis Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 12:22 PM
My friend, Vijay, we have no chance without the help of Cupid! Thank you for your kind visit and comment! Take care!
Kannan Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 6:34 AM
This is such a cute romantic verse... I enjoyed it...
Trifiatis Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 12:19 PM
Well, when it comes to winning the heart of a lovely lady, we need the intervention of divine Cupid. Otherwise, we have no chance of succeeding, dearest Supraja! Thank you for your kind visit and comment! Hugs xxx
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February 2, 2021 at 3:06 AM
Lovely write for Valentine's Day, a wonderful loving day... lovely and loving, a tender gift to the reader. God bless you always with love and prayers, Gina
Trifiatis Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 12:15 PM
Thank you very much for your comment, dearest Gina! Blessings
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