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Valentine's Prayer Ii

Oh, universal love, You, divine force of attraction That Makes Cosmos’ enamored parts unite with One another, I beg you, My heart with hers fuse For To beat in unison forever! © Demetrios Trifiatis 03 February 2016

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Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 2/9/2016 2:30:00 PM

So humbling and fervent.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/9/2016 3:09:00 PM

Iris, the goddess of the rainbow in Greek mythology! What a lovely and ancient name you have got my, dear Iris! Thank you so much for your precious visit and comment!

Ralph Sergi

Date: 2/3/2016 11:21:00 AM

An enamoring poem, Demetrius!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/3/2016 2:00:00 PM

Ralph, dear friend, it is so nice to see you! Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/3/2016 4:13:00 AM

- A loving message ..."To beat in unison forever!" - A line for eternity - Beautiful poem, dear friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/3/2016 4:23:00 AM

So happy you liked it, dearest, Anne-Lise! Hope you will have a great Valentine's! Hugs