Valentines Poem
3 months and our first valentines
You are everything “beautiful and sublime”
You make me want to “do better”
I’m yours always and forever
-love a failed poet and proud bf
Context: it’s our 3 months and a catch phrase of hers is “do better”
Please critique as harshly as you’d like. Thanks!
Copyright © Kevin Hazrati | Year Posted 2021
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