Liam Mcdaid Poet Couplet

- Valentines Kiss -

Forever dazzling golden memories treasure flashbacks
Floating always within deep waters mirror reflections

There's nothing in the universe that compares to you
Into our world of inspirational and beautiful dreams

Growing wings in loves light freedom flies
Inside dancing warm waves of feathered feelings

I believe that you're my destiny I see the shine in my life
These are the special things that make me love you

Soul touching beautiful blue rising sparkling diamond kiss
Salted from deepest ocean currents one dream sings 

Exactly where the ocean begins and it decides to meet
Making me want to live in the moment forever
 
Sweet lips burst with flavor tides turn as the piper fish plays music
Flying over the sea sweet tunes dancing in ripples of light 

With honesty and compassion a gift so great
I can only give you one thing my love is where you are


A co write written by Liam Mc Daid and Anne-Lise Andresen
thank you anne lise a pleasure writing this with you dear friend

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Etienne Lariviere February 9, 2015 at 4:43 PM I applaud you, fantastique Liam Mcdaid March 8, 2015 at 2:21 PM thank you ever so kindly for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated bless you

Dorian Petersen Potter February 7, 2015 at 9:30 PM Hi Liam n Anne-Lise! I have to return and congratulate you both on your beautiful poem here being chosen as the POTD! A 7 +++ to each from me! You both deserve it, my dearest friends. Mighty golden pens! Have a wonderful Sunday! In His light! God bless you! :) Love n hugs! xxoxox D. ^O^ Liam Mcdaid February 8, 2015 at 7:48 AM thank you kindly dorian dear pal for your comment on myself anne lise valentines kiss deeply appreciated bless you wishing you a blessed sunday

James Ranahan February 7, 2015 at 4:54 PM Beautiful thoughts, beautifully written. Happy Valentines Day. Liam Mcdaid February 8, 2015 at 7:53 AM thank you kindly for the truly beautiful comment wishing you also a happy valentines dear pal

Gary Bateman February 7, 2015 at 4:00 PM Liam and Anne-Lise, Congratulations on a most wonderful Valentine's poem and for it being featured at POTD!! Very Well-Done!! A "7" + A FAV!! Best Always, Gary Liam Mcdaid February 8, 2015 at 8:23 AM hi dear pal wonderful comment gary the leprechaun is dancing a jig wishing you and your beautiful wife a blessed sunday passing you both a warm smile

Jean Omalley Polatnick February 7, 2015 at 2:51 PM Warm, romantic write ... congrats to you both on POTD!! :) Liam Mcdaid February 8, 2015 at 9:42 AM jean thank you ever so kindly for the beautiful comment wishing you a blessed sunday

Marilyn Williams February 7, 2015 at 2:45 PM Perfect poem for an unperfect day. Thanks for your thoughts. Liam Mcdaid February 8, 2015 at 9:55 AM marilyn thank you for the wonderful comment wishing you a blessed sunday

Jan Allison February 7, 2015 at 12:05 PM Well done Anne Lise and Liam poem of the day woohoo:-) Hugs jan xx Liam Mcdaid February 8, 2015 at 9:58 AM thank you jan dear pal dazzling beautiful comment wishing you a great sunday

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 7, 2015 at 10:52 AM A beautiful collab from the two of you...I wish you both A Happy Valentine's Day and congrats on being chosen TPOD!! Hugs, Rhonda Liam Mcdaid February 8, 2015 at 10:06 AM a happy valentines day to you also rhonda thank you kindly for the wonderful comment wishing you a blessed sunday

Eve Roper February 7, 2015 at 10:02 AM Fascinating write, Liam & Anne-Lise , 7 from me. Congratulations on your Poem of the Day. Blessings Eve Liam Mcdaid February 8, 2015 at 10:10 AM thank you eve dear pal for the wonderful comment wishing you a blessed day

Richard Lamoureux February 7, 2015 at 8:54 AM Another wonderful co-write! Liam Mcdaid February 8, 2015 at 10:27 AM thank you so kindly richard wishing you a blessed day deeply appreciated

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 7, 2015 at 7:47 AM beautiful in every way.. :)! congrats for being chosen as POEM of the day.. Anne Lise is a wow poet like you..:)!//olive eloisa Liam Mcdaid February 8, 2015 at 10:49 AM dazzling comment olive dear pal wishing you a blessed day thank you kindly

Tim Smith February 7, 2015 at 7:43 AM how beautiful you two...congrats....Tim Liam Mcdaid February 8, 2015 at 10:54 AM thank you kindly dear pal wishing you a blessed day beautiful comment tim

Anne-Lise Andresen February 7, 2015 at 5:52 AM - WOOOOW ... Liam !!!!! - A pleasure to see this as P.O.T.D. !!!!! ..... me: HAPPY !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :))))) Liam Mcdaid February 8, 2015 at 10:56 AM anne your magic words sparked this piece into the stars smiling a pleasure writing this with you pal wishing you a blessed sunday

Mohamed Adel February 7, 2015 at 5:35 AM A beautiful romantic poem, congrats Lise and Liam :) Liam Mcdaid February 8, 2015 at 12:17 PM thank you very kindly mohamed wishing you a blessed day Mohamed Adel February 7, 2015 at 5:37 AM Anne Lise*

Kelly Deschler February 6, 2015 at 6:46 PM Love certainly has a way of making the heart flutter and want to take flight, as we do in our dreams... This is a wonderful poem for Valentine's Day, and a lovely collaboration, Anne-Lise and Liam! Liam Mcdaid February 8, 2015 at 3:05 PM thank you kelly dear pal for the truly wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated wishing you a blessed day

Kp Nunez February 6, 2015 at 1:32 PM A timeless" piece of write...my dear friends... your pens wove the fabric of soft and silky feelings for a beloved... Awesome 7 and to the favs...Smiles from the land of thousand isles...:D Kim Liam Mcdaid February 8, 2015 at 3:14 PM smiles from the land of the teddy bear the emerald isle thank you for the truly wonderful comment kim heartfelt appreciated anne lise i am sure will agree wishing you a blessed day

Sara Kendrick February 6, 2015 at 11:59 AM Great work..Wonderful love story..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara..One is never too old to look at the ants again ...You might find that it was the most relaxing time spent in a day..

Constance La France February 6, 2015 at 9:39 AM Liam, you both did a fantastic write with this poem so full of love and lovely words, well done and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 6, 2015 at 8:03 AM poem burst with flavor and "sea sweet tunes dancing in ripples of light" liam /anne lise "I can only give you one thing my love ' for this poem..you are very special.....Hugs! rajat

Demetrios Trifiatis February 6, 2015 at 7:14 AM A phantasmagoric display of feelings enchanting the soul and heart! A seven to each of you, Anne-Lise and Liam! Liam Mcdaid February 7, 2015 at 2:40 PM paul thank you ever so much dear friend yeah anne lise is really inspiring writer she is so creative in her pen wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you

Shadow Hamilton February 6, 2015 at 6:28 AM hauntingly beautiful Liam hugs

Avijeet Das February 5, 2015 at 10:23 PM Sigh! Soul stirring lines..... Kudos Liam and Anne-Lise for penning this great write-up!

Arthur Vaso February 5, 2015 at 8:16 PM So wistfully beautiful you two!!! Lovely poem!

Andrea Dietrich February 5, 2015 at 6:33 PM a very sweet valentine kiss it is. Great job, you two!

Paul Callus February 5, 2015 at 2:29 PM Sweet, soul touching and romantic....the perfect write for Valentine Day. You two make a right good pair! #7 // paul

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