Valentine's Ellip--Puppy Love

I love you.
				You're great,
				you cutie!

				Won't you please
				be my sweet 
				Valentine?

				Tonight I'll
				dream of your 
				big blue eyes.

				Tomorrow
				you'll get the 
				card I sent.

				I got yours
				today. Thanks.
				I love it.

				Mom says I
				have to end
				this long text.

				Hope you call
				or text me
				tomorrow.

				See you at
				school next week.
				One more thing:			

				Without you,
				sixth grade would 
				be so BLAH!

posted in February 2016

entered in John Hamilton's Your Best Free Verse Love Poem on
February 4, 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kimathi Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 6:47 AM
Greetings Janice. Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
Canerdy Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 7:24 PM
Thank you. Janice
Gigno Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 11:59 AM
!!!
Canerdy Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 1:25 PM
Thanks--I think! Janice
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 12:12 AM
How sweet this is Janice...made me smile. G L in the contest. ; )
Canerdy Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 12:32 AM
Thanks so much, Connie. Janice
Godwin Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 11:34 AM
Great job - love the 'text' reference and the catchy end. Enjoyable and lighthearted ... thank you for my smile ... CayCay
Canerdy Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 12:44 PM
Caycay, thank you for this great, uplifting response! Janice
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