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Valentine's Ellip Contest

Low-cut dress Jeweled excess You inspire Wine this eve Let’s conceive Our desire Cordon bleu Dancing, too Hearts afire My lament Time’s descent Night’s expired 2/14/2016 For Gigno's Valentine's Ellip Contest As "Ellip" is not listed among the forms, I just labeled this effort "Verse."

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Date: 6/9/2016 10:26:00 PM
Steve, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 2/20/2016 5:55:00 AM
Excellent entry, Steve. Sure to be on the winners list. Elaine
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Date: 2/21/2016 3:57:00 AM
I don't know about that, Elaine--there are so many talented people here. But thanks for the vote of confidence.
Date: 2/19/2016 9:35:00 PM
Very well written and a great rhyme scheme. Those romantic nights seem to fly by too quickly, don't they?
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Date: 2/21/2016 3:58:00 AM
Thanks, Timothy. As a function of aging, I doze off on romantic nights.
Date: 2/19/2016 9:37:00 AM
great job with these!!! Hope I can do as well.
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Date: 2/21/2016 4:00:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea. Based on your track record here, I suspect you will do better.
Date: 2/19/2016 12:54:00 AM
Curious little form. You write well both in short and long forms. This requires intense focus to bring about the story. Impressive!
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Steve Grammatico
Date: 2/21/2016 4:02:00 AM
I appreciate the compliment, Kim. You are right about the intense focus required to produce something like this. I'm still playing with it.
Date: 2/14/2016 7:40:00 PM
A good one, Steve--Janice
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Steve Grammatico
Date: 2/21/2016 4:05:00 AM
Thanks, Janice. A kind word is always appreciated.

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