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Like magic, after Christmas day has passed, the stores in malls display their hearts of red, and Christmas love, short-lived, will be outcast by a new holiday of love instead. Observed with cards and candy, flowers too, vendors of gifts for ones held dear in hearts, bombard us with those options all in view that guilt of 'not caught up in' soon imparts. Valentine Shmalentine...a joke for sure, as these commercial gifts don't fill the need to truly show the love, heartfelt and pure, that acts of kindness always supersede. But merchants quickly act to claim their win before the Easter madness waltzes in. Sandra M. Haight ~1st Place~ Contest: Valentine Shmalentine Sponsor: Nicola Byrne Judged: 01/30/2017

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Date: 2/3/2017 10:54:00 PM
Congrats on your win. True what you said...but the this valentine festive mood is lovely! Well done. Congrats. :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/4/2017 2:30:00 PM
Yes, I do agree, Sunita! Just wanted to accommodate the theme! Thanks! Sandra
Date: 2/1/2017 5:14:00 AM
Hi Sandra. Congrats for your well, deserved second placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/4/2017 2:29:00 PM
Thanks so much, Teddy. Sandra
Date: 1/31/2017 1:57:00 PM
Ah Yes Sandra, "The Merchants of Menace"...nicely done .. congrats on your placement.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/4/2017 2:29:00 PM
Yup! Thanks, John. Sandra
Date: 1/31/2017 2:39:00 AM
Great sonnet! Congratulations :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/4/2017 2:28:00 PM
Thank you, Darren. Sandra
Date: 1/30/2017 9:37:00 PM
Very true! You penned it all with such grace. Congratulations on your fine win, Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/4/2017 2:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Afzal! Sandra
Date: 1/30/2017 8:29:00 PM
Yup it's all about those merchants! Congrats, Sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/4/2017 2:27:00 PM
Thank you, Kim! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/23/2017 3:58:00 PM
well done, Sandra. you are one of many fantastic poems written on this theme. I am loving them!!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/26/2017 7:36:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/22/2017 2:57:00 PM
ha ha ha love the cynicism here Sandra I was giggling as I agree with every word and think Nicola will love this too - love that final couple it is oh so true!:-) hugs jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/26/2017 7:36:00 AM
Thank you, Jan. All the holiday commercialism gets to be a bit much! Hugs, Sandra

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