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Valentine Score

Here it is lovers!
   The violin timbral,
      Rembrandt’s chiaroscuro,
         the crescendo of a crescent moon - ((2/14/2021))
      duet hearts of light and shadow,
   the morsel of a kiss,
soulmates of bliss.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Ball Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 1:17 PM
WoW! Beautifully written and love both pics. Nice job. God Bless, JB
Rodrigues Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 3:33 PM
Thank you, Judy!
Babcock Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 8:33 AM
What a lovely poem for Valentine's. A gem. love phyl
Rodrigues Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 1:55 PM
Thank you, Phyl!
Buhagiar Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 10:44 PM
I had my romantic moments. So what's the score now 1 -1 :) ~~
Rodrigues Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 4:21 AM
Hugs, my friend!
Krutsinger Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 9:08 PM
So delicate and pretty, romantical and gorgeous, Happy Valentines Day Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 4:22 AM
Thank you, sweet one! HVD to you too! <3
Horsman Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 8:58 PM
For anyone to open their card and read this inside of it, would be blown away, Kim,,truly is beautiful.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 4:28 AM
Thank you, sweet man! <3
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February 15, 2021 at 4:22 AM
Thank you, sweet man! <3
Wolf Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 8:04 PM
Can I stop crying now? It's been decades since I've known romantic moments as you've penned them. I remember them well. Kids and the grind of marriage can sure wear the romance out of it. The love grows, but the romance goes... On reflection, I'm truly so grateful for the steady constant warmth of the love... Ooh. You sure got to me with this one, my friend. ~ Enraptured, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 4:23 AM
You have truly made me feel special! Thank you, dear friend! Handing you a handkerchief to wipe those tears. <3
Calasibetta Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 2:48 PM
How lovely! I can hear the violins, and the rhythm of the beauty of symphonic love.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 4:09 PM
Thank you, Paulette!
Cunningham Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 1:37 PM
Lovely romantic imagery Kim, hope you've had a lovely day. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 4:09 PM
I have! Thank you, Tom! Thank you!
Logan Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 11:13 AM
You've summed up quite nicely the perfect Valentine's Day's symbols. Your lines are as wonderful as those roses are beautiful, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 4:06 PM
Thank you, Jenna!
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