Valentine Music

Valentine
stretches the
envelope
...

a blue moon
her eyes swoon
while I croon
...

serenade
falls so flat
she's grinning
...

arms reach 'round
she kisses me
music divine
...

written 28 February 2016
elliptical poem
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gigno Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 11:53 AM
I do not like to read about sadness but it was a great representation of the form.
Gigno Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 2:04 AM
!!!
Poteet Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 12:28 PM
thanks, Gigno, it was the disaster of a daredevil heart.
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