Valentine Morning

My drowsy eyes turn to wander Where window gazing, finds a crescent moon Rifting the darkness, and against it's light A magnolia branch is stenciled, black and keen Three stars are tangled in the topmost bough... And because deep loveliness is there, I turn to you... You lay in half light As the fringe of dawn approaches Breeze stirs the sheer lace curtains Our room is infused with crimson hues I’m wishing you might soon awaken But you are sleeping soundly With such contentment It seems all the worry lines Have disappeared from your face Your legs are tangled In the softness of the sheets Your familiar hand now lies Gently on my waist The profile on the pillow Is that boy from long ago I love watching you Your lashes are fluttering What are you dreaming, my love? How could one explain That a love like this exists Before coffee, on a Thursday morning in a shadowed room? ...................................... PD's Contest: Any Valentine Will Do By Carrie Richards 9/26/11
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Taylor Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 4:44 PM
Congrats, Carrie. Well earned win. Thanks for your kind comment. xxxRalph
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February 17, 2013 at 4:47 AM
- A lovely Valentines poem, it had to win! - CONGRATULATIONS, CARRIE !! - Have a beautifully Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Gasun Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 9:43 PM
Congratulations my dear friend Carrie for your very lovely write and fantastic win! I enjoyed reading your great Valentines poem! love/hugs, Leonora
May Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 6:30 PM
wonderful write Carrie....congrats on your win
Gildersleeve Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 5:24 PM
Congrats on your awesome win Carrie. - Connie
Merryman Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 4:26 PM
Carrie, congrats on your win with this lovely, romantic poem! Love, Kim
Lamoureux Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 4:20 PM
This is a wonderful slice of joy, well done!
Guzzi Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 3:45 PM
Right up there in the top where you should be XXOOO Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Haick Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 3:02 PM
: ) Beautiful! Congratulations on a very fine win, Carrie! Enjoy your weekend!
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February 16, 2013 at 2:10 PM
Carrie, CONGRATULATIONS :-) with your lovely and wonderful poem. always & forever *LINDA
Mehta Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 1:03 PM
Congratulations onn the win in the contest of P.D., Carrie
Sweetheart Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 11:51 AM
Congrats Carrie on another grand win with this fantastic poetry luv.. great enlightening words luv..
A   Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 11:20 AM
CARRIE~~Congratulations on your posted poem of the week. God bless,..p.d.
Brown Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 10:15 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Your Best Poem this Week" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Foster Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 9:56 PM
Yes, a really dreamy poem oozing soft sensuality. congratulations on your deserved win Carrie. cheers Margaret
Jones Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 4:20 PM
how could one indeed? perhaps the magnolia holds the secret? Beauty write, Carrie, congrats! Namaste~N
Sweetheart Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 4:09 PM
Congrats Carrie on first place win with this fantastic entry for the contest luv..
Johnson Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 3:03 PM
Congratulations Carrie. Lovely poem and rated right up there where it should be. Love, Joyce
Guzzi Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 1:12 PM
A fine write and a lovely gift to a dear one. Congrad's Light & Love
Brown Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 1:01 PM
What a great win you have here in Nette's "Soft Sensuality contest, congratulations Carrie. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 12:27 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette, Carrie
Quigley Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 12:31 AM
Loved this. My guess is you have a winner here. Good luck in the contest.
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