Valentine Limerick For Dw

Valentine Limerick- for DW







As I shared all my poetic emotions with you,
Change of inspiring avatar was a blunt in the blue,
Broken heart spurns to beat,
Misconstrues your intent of deceit,
To the flightless birds, can you bid adieu ??






Written Feb 17th, 2015
For contest by SKAT A

Awarded 8th place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 10:22 PM
Big congrats, Dr. Upma!
A   Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 5:18 PM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
Callus Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 1:33 PM
Back with congratulations, Upma. I have a feeling that avatar is there to stay:) // paul
Allison Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 11:29 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Dr Sharma:-) Hugs jan xx
A  Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 10:09 AM
DW, Congratulations, thanks for the contest support. Hugs SKAT
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 8:47 PM
A great limerick, Dr Sharma, but shame on the one who deceived you! Best wishes in the contest...hugs, Rhonda
A. Sharma Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 4:05 AM
Not really Rhonda,,its a limerick my dear,,thanks! Appreciate ur kind visit!
Callus Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 1:49 PM
Very good offering, Upma. Waxingly lyrical:) I suppose we'll be seeing another change of avatar soon. // paul
A. Sharma Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 4:04 AM
Appreciate Paul! Don't think he will since hez very possessive about those birds!
Allison Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 10:48 AM
Great limerick Dr Sharma - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
A. Sharma Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 4:03 AM
Thanks Jan!
Nance Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 7:41 AM
I like it! Best of luck in the contest :)
A. Sharma Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 4:03 AM
Thanks Casarah!
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