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Valentine Haiku

. a day’s diary turns to unwritten pages…. a new sun rises from smoldering dark, a spark ignites heart of dawn… flames kindle the hills darkness falls away like the velvet rose petals.... a gold ring of sun soft slippered skies watch while drowsy earth awakens…. garlands of pink clouds sun kisses the frost with glittery lace designs… dapples of white glass begging attention, the garden bursts into bloom… valentine bouquet all the red roses stand tall with unabashed pride… birds sing from the heart P.S. Each morning sunrise is a valentine's gift. :) For P.D.'s Contest: Valentine Haiku

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Date: 1/16/2012 5:06:00 PM
Awesome as can be. For me, they are the tops! Belated congrats, Carrie
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Date: 1/16/2012 5:06:00 PM
I was looking for my favorites and can't seem to pick the best. So I will just fave them!
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Date: 1/16/2012 1:36:00 PM
A belated congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Valentine HAIKU" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/13/2012 9:31:00 PM
CONGRATS CARRIE ON A GREAT WIN ..PRECIOUS WORDS ...
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Date: 1/13/2012 1:36:00 PM
Congratulations on a very fine win, Carrie! This takes me to a beautiful garden in Spring. Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/13/2012 2:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carrie x
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Date: 1/12/2012 9:32:00 PM
Carrie... Congratulation, ;-) in my contest. Thank you for charming up nature. Have a good night,..always,..p.d.
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Date: 1/10/2012 12:29:00 PM
Excelent Imagery here Carrie.Each set stands as beautiful haiku.Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 1/9/2012 10:29:00 PM
Very nice valentine haiku!! Loved reading it. :) Keep up the great work!! ~Amber
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Date: 1/9/2012 1:24:00 PM
Hi carrie, haven't seen your writing in sometime. very nice one. keep pennin' and spendin'
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Date: 1/8/2012 5:14:00 PM
A beautiful garden bathed in bright sunshine...for the eyes to feast upon. Simply wonderful haiku's !!! You'd have my vote for 1st with this one. Enjoyed much !!
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Date: 1/8/2012 1:28:00 PM
Wow! Each individual haiku is a masterpiece of it's own, but strung together, they paint a Sistine Chapel-like extravaganza. It's like a boquet of beautiful roses, each a perfect flower, but even more powerful as a boquet. Good luck in the contest! Glad to hear that you treat each sunrise as your own valentine's gift - what a great outlook on life. Joe
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Date: 1/7/2012 10:56:00 PM
Love the last one...birds do sing from their heart. What a nice piece. BG
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Date: 1/7/2012 9:34:00 PM
Wow Carrie that is a majestic write! You are the king of a sunrise! I know you have written of other lovely things in your poem, I just am very impressed with the sunrise descriptions! So impressed I took ideas from your poem and wrote my own poem of sunrises! Thank you for the inspiration! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 1/7/2012 9:35:00 PM
Sorry Carrie, I meant you are the QUEEN of a sunrise....not KING like I put in the comment, sorry about that!!
Date: 1/7/2012 8:57:00 PM
Very nice, particularly liked the fourth 'sun kisses the frost' et cetera. Imagery was excellent and I think your play on the the theme will be more original. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/7/2012 7:45:00 PM
PD should like this sweet set of haiku. I like them.
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