Valentine Goodbye

A rose blooms.
Love showed me a new way
She was mine
My Valentine
Smile shine
Holy shrine
Stars align
Hearts combine
Soul refine
My finish line
And then love took her away
A rose dies.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 4:51 AM
Very creative and interesting write on valentine, Bilal
A   Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 9:43 PM
deep write Bilal,..p.d.
Pettit Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 9:21 PM
Your work looked fine.
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