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Valentine Goodbye

A rose blooms.
Love showed me a new way
She was mine
My Valentine
Smile shine
Holy shrine
Stars align
Hearts combine
Soul refine
My finish line
And then love took her away
A rose dies.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/15/2011 4:51:00 AM
Very creative and interesting write on valentine, Bilal
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Date: 2/14/2011 9:43:00 PM
deep write Bilal,..p.d.
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Date: 2/14/2011 9:21:00 PM
Your work looked fine.
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