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Valentine Gift

teeming with desire

she hungers for his first kiss-

her transformation


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© 7th February 2019

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Eileen Manassian

March 13, 2020 at 2:27 PM

Wow! How passionately sweet! :)

Paul Callus

March 16, 2020 at 10:55 AM

I had no doubt you'd like it, Eileen...thank you. Hugs // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu

July 4, 2019 at 7:30 PM

Hello Paul, She waits for him to kiss ger for the first time. Have a nice evening my friend. Regards Darlene.

Paul Callus

July 5, 2019 at 6:00 AM

Thank you, Darlene. Have a nice day! Regards // paul

Eve Roper

April 5, 2019 at 8:49 AM

Perfect Senryu, Paul, have a nice weekend. Hugs Eve ~`*

Paul Callus

April 5, 2019 at 9:27 AM

Thank you, Eve. May you also have an enjoyable weekend. Hugs // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

February 14, 2019 at 6:12 PM

A simple kiss and the feeling it inspires in us is indeed a gift and one that can be remembered forever. A lovely Senryu Paul! Happy Valentine's Day to you and yours! xxoo

Paul Callus

February 15, 2019 at 9:36 AM

Many thanks, Connie. I hope you had an enjoyable Valentine's Day. Wishing you a lovely weekend. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

February 13, 2019 at 8:12 PM

very nice, and Valentine's Day is almost here now!

Paul Callus

February 14, 2019 at 7:38 AM

Thank you, Andrea. Happy Valentine's Day to you!!! // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

February 10, 2019 at 5:13 PM

A simple kiss can make me melt, Paul. What a great senryu for Valentine's Day. Hope yours is romantic and wonderful. Love, Carolyn

Paul Callus

February 11, 2019 at 2:41 PM

The first kiss is usually a promise of more to come, Carolyn! Thank you for liking my Valentine Senryu. Only 3 more days for this romantic annual appointment. Hugs & love // paul