Valentine Gift

teeming with desire she hungers for his first kiss- her transformation - - - - - - - - - - - - - © 7th February 2019

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/13/2020 2:27:00 PM

Wow! How passionately sweet! :)

Paul Callus
Date: 3/16/2020 10:55:00 AM

I had no doubt you'd like it, Eileen...thank you. Hugs // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/4/2019 7:30:00 PM

Hello Paul, She waits for him to kiss ger for the first time. Have a nice evening my friend. Regards Darlene.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/5/2019 6:00:00 AM

Thank you, Darlene. Have a nice day! Regards // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 4/5/2019 8:49:00 AM

Perfect Senryu, Paul, have a nice weekend. Hugs Eve ~`*

Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2019 9:27:00 AM

Thank you, Eve. May you also have an enjoyable weekend. Hugs // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/14/2019 6:12:00 PM

A simple kiss and the feeling it inspires in us is indeed a gift and one that can be remembered forever. A lovely Senryu Paul! Happy Valentine's Day to you and yours! xxoo

Paul Callus
Date: 2/15/2019 9:36:00 AM

Many thanks, Connie. I hope you had an enjoyable Valentine's Day. Wishing you a lovely weekend. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2019 8:12:00 PM

very nice, and Valentine's Day is almost here now!

Paul Callus
Date: 2/14/2019 7:38:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. Happy Valentine's Day to you!!! // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/10/2019 5:13:00 PM

A simple kiss can make me melt, Paul. What a great senryu for Valentine's Day. Hope yours is romantic and wonderful. Love, Carolyn

Paul Callus
Date: 2/11/2019 2:41:00 PM

The first kiss is usually a promise of more to come, Carolyn! Thank you for liking my Valentine Senryu. Only 3 more days for this romantic annual appointment. Hugs & love // paul