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Part 2.

Valentine delight!
I know it's just a first date...
Should I stay the night?

I see what you need!
Even though I don't know you...
What's wrong with tonight?

How tempting of you!
But what's a couple more days...
What if it's not right?

(Contest entry: "(Double) Haiku and Questionku")

Valentine Delight

Part 1.

Valentine delight!
I know it's just a first date...
I should spend a night.

I see what you want!
Although we recently met...
Let's live for tonight.

How tempting of you!
But what's a couple more days...
What if it's not right?

Copyright © ... Gigno | Year Posted 2013

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Andrea Dietrich

February 19, 2013 at 8:52 PM

I sure remember this one. GREAT to see it on the winners list. congrats to you.

Olusegun Arowolo

February 17, 2013 at 4:00 PM

Beautiful piece,Gigno.Congratulations on your well deserved win.kudos to you

February 17, 2013 at 2:31 AM

congratulations on your win....

February 16, 2013 at 11:35 PM

Congratulations my dear friend Gigno for your very lovely write and fantastic win! I enjoyed reading your great Valentines poem! love/hugs, Leonora

February 16, 2013 at 3:32 PM

Congratulations on your very fine win, Gigno!

Poet Destroyer A

February 16, 2013 at 1:56 PM

HELLO GINGO, thank you for the support, and fun loving haiku + questionku... Congrats, with all my heart :-) LINDA

February 15, 2013 at 12:02 PM

!!! Good use of words.

Poet Destroyer A

February 14, 2013 at 8:10 PM

soup mail... thanks... PD

Poet Destroyer A

February 14, 2013 at 7:23 PM

!!!... soup mail.... PD

February 14, 2013 at 6:11 PM

Great treatment of Haiku..... Jake

February 14, 2013 at 6:36 AM

:)

February 14, 2013 at 2:17 AM

"!!!"

Andrea Dietrich

February 13, 2013 at 11:35 PM

I like how you did yours. It's very nice for a new valentine!

February 13, 2013 at 12:32 PM

Part two might be the death of my pacemaker. I salute your wisdom. daver

February 13, 2013 at 11:03 AM

:-)

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