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Part 2.

Valentine delight!
I know it's just a first date...
Should I stay the night?

I see what you need!
Even though I don't know you...
What's wrong with tonight?

How tempting of you!
But what's a couple more days...
What if it's not right?

(Contest entry: "(Double) Haiku and Questionku")
Part 1.

Valentine delight!
I know it's just a first date...
I should spend a night.

I see what you want!
Although we recently met...
Let's live for tonight.

How tempting of you!
But what's a couple more days...
What if it's not right?

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Date: 2/19/2013 8:52:00 PM
I sure remember this one. GREAT to see it on the winners list. congrats to you.
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Date: 2/17/2013 4:00:00 PM
Beautiful piece,Gigno.Congratulations on your well deserved win.kudos to you
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Date: 2/17/2013 2:31:00 AM
congratulations on your win....
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Date: 2/16/2013 11:35:00 PM
Congratulations my dear friend Gigno for your very lovely write and fantastic win! I enjoyed reading your great Valentines poem! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 2/16/2013 3:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your very fine win, Gigno!
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Date: 2/16/2013 1:56:00 PM
HELLO GINGO, thank you for the support, and fun loving haiku + questionku... Congrats, with all my heart :-) LINDA
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Date: 2/15/2013 12:02:00 PM
!!! Good use of words.
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Date: 2/14/2013 8:10:00 PM
soup mail... thanks... PD
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Date: 2/14/2013 7:23:00 PM
!!!... soup mail.... PD
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Date: 2/14/2013 6:11:00 PM
Great treatment of Haiku..... Jake
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Date: 2/14/2013 6:36:00 AM
:)
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Date: 2/14/2013 2:17:00 AM
"!!!"
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Date: 2/13/2013 11:35:00 PM
I like how you did yours. It's very nice for a new valentine!
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Date: 2/13/2013 12:32:00 PM
Part two might be the death of my pacemaker. I salute your wisdom. daver
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Date: 2/13/2013 11:03:00 AM
:-)
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