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Valentine Day 2016

Awakened early on this Sunday morn, Without thought that it was a special day, As carefree as the day that I was born. For breakfast I would have some flakes of corn. And for my food I'd bow my head to pray. Awakened early on this Sunday morn. Before I choose my outfit to adorn My body, I climb on the scales to weigh, As carefree as the day that I was born. Between computer and newspaper torn, And eager for what email had to say, Awakened early on this Sunday morn. No pretty cards for me I would have sworn. Two Valentines from far across the way. As carefree as the day that I was born. Though my love is gone I won't be forlorn. Friends do not care if my hair has turned grey. Awakened early on this Sunday morn, As carefree as the day that I was born. 2/13/16

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Date: 3/20/2016 11:26:00 PM
Joyce, Congratulations on your "Valentine's Day 2016 WIN." Love LINDA
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Date: 3/16/2016 8:15:00 PM
Truth came out nicely in rhythm, the beauty is in acceptance. hugs, Bobby
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Date: 3/16/2016 12:22:00 PM
I feel with you Joyce. Congrats to win Love. Anisha
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Date: 3/16/2016 10:49:00 AM
My big congratulations on your win, Joyce. It's a profound and bittersweet. I feel the emotion in your beautiful verses. I am glad I have shared this moment with you. Hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 3/16/2016 1:46:00 AM
a deep and meaningful write Joyce you nailed the complicated rhyme pattern excellently congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 3/16/2016 1:42:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win Joyce..
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Date: 3/15/2016 8:27:00 PM
Excellent job on this form, Joyce. Janice
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Date: 3/15/2016 2:05:00 PM
Joyce, congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo
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Date: 3/15/2016 12:13:00 PM
Back to say, Congratulations, Joyce on your winning write. Peace my dear:)
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Date: 3/15/2016 6:06:00 AM
A very sweet write Joyce.
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Date: 2/14/2016 7:13:00 PM
I love your villanelle. I don't care if your hair is gray either, at least you have some.LOL :) HVD!
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