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Valentine Current

valentine current— rose petals on sail away pasties on her deck 2/3/2021 A Valentine’s Senryu Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/4/2021 6:55:00 PM
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That last line truly floored me. Great job!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2021 7:36:00 PM
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Thank you :)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/4/2021 4:45:00 PM
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Great senryu Kim - GL in the contest! Linda
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2021 7:36:00 PM
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Thank you, Linda!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/4/2021 1:59:00 PM
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hmmm, maybe you have a different definition for pasties than I know. I just had to check out a valentine senryu. Love the imagery of the rose petals on the current.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2021 2:21:00 PM
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Rose petal pasties covering her buds basically. ;)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/4/2021 3:18:00 AM
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I'm thinking about the implications of your lines, Kim. lol
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2021 4:51:00 AM
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LOL! Right?! Must be morning: “red in the morning, Sailor take warning” ;)
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 2/4/2021 3:02:00 AM
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Not a valentine for me. I am forgotten. ~~
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/4/2021 3:17:00 AM
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Victor, you are not forgotten. You can be my valentine, for I have none to claim. I hope that made you smile.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/4/2021 1:36:00 AM
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- A great one, Kim :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2021 4:46:00 AM
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Thank you, Anne-Lise! <3

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