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Since I am diabetic, I will have to eat sparingly of my favorite food...No I won't covet it in the Biblical sense..

Valentine Chocolate and the Diabetic

Some fudge
Begrudge
Covet
You bet


Sponsor: Judy Konos
Contest:Footles

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2015 2:18:00 PM

Sara, Congrats on your FOOTLE POEM win. LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/11/2015 10:38:00 PM

hey, this is pretty neat seeing these again!! big congrats, Sara

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 4/9/2015 1:41:00 PM

I like the addition of rhyme, a bad combination, sweet tooth and diabetes. You learn to live with it. Felicitations on your fine footle, Sara.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/7/2015 11:41:00 AM

I can appreciate this one - dad was diabetic - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Maureen Lefanue

Date: 2/23/2012 3:56:00 PM

Thanks, Sara, for your kind comment re my poem. I am about to publish my third book entitled, Easter Poems. I will publish 12 photobooks of my Christian poetry [2 have already been completed] and can be purchased in PDF very cheaply from my website. I really relate to your clever poem above. I love chocolate but can't eat is or fudge for that matter. I have to sit and watch everyone else eat their sweets! Love, Maureen

Matthew Anish

Date: 2/9/2012 3:03:00 PM

I know the feeling - I have to avoic sugar myself - and things like fudge are very tempting. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Carol Eastman

Date: 2/9/2012 8:15:00 AM

Enjoyed the read...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/9/2012 5:02:00 AM

Like it Sara, and I LOVE chocolate! - Good luck in the contest. - love Anne-Lise

Maureen Lefanue

Date: 2/9/2012 4:43:00 AM

Thank you, Sara, for your kind commet on my poem. Good luck with your poem (I loved it - very clever) in Dane's Valentine Footles Contest! Luv, Mauren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/8/2012 6:02:00 PM

sorry I can't look for a poem of yours I have not seen yet. Joe is almost home. I need to hurry and make sloppy JOES hahaha. LUv, Andrea

Jack Horne

Date: 2/8/2012 1:28:00 PM

Yes, I can imagine, my friend. Clever footle

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/8/2012 1:01:00 PM

witty read topped with sweet fun, sara.. best wishes; i like!..:) huggs!

Deck Fitzgerald

Date: 2/8/2012 12:44:00 PM

Im a type 2 Sara and i do like a bit of dark choc , and if you drink a cup of black coffee as i do you can sneak a few squares in occasionally to counter your blood suger fall :) tis my secret , enjoyed Sara Hugs and best wishes Declan xx

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/8/2012 12:26:00 PM

hehe, enjoyed your witty series and your title as well Sara. Hope things are going great on your side :) tc Wilma

Adrienne Gresham

Date: 2/8/2012 12:23:00 PM

This is goood, thanks for sharing

Dinda Minardi

Date: 2/8/2012 8:56:00 AM

Witty witty, Sara. Such a great footle.. Thanks for stopping by, dear. :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/7/2012 7:33:00 PM

fascinating title for all who cope with this disease .. great footles Sara.. to lighten the burden with a smile.. good luck luv.. a grand entry ..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/7/2012 6:56:00 PM

Good ones, Sara. I have not even a clue yet what to do with this contest!! (and yes, of course, I was just trying to be funny with baby gaga, though it was pretty close to the truth hahaha)

Erich Goller

Date: 2/7/2012 3:30:00 PM

Lovely poem, not many words but they say a lot.Thanks for sharing it,God bless you.Hugs!Erich

Tim B

Date: 2/7/2012 2:49:00 PM

Mrs. Sara, never seen this form. Succinct and well said, I know so many who covet the above without a doubt, some even eat dove ;). Good luck in the contest! P.S. I believe you meant 'begrudge'

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/7/2012 2:31:00 PM

Great meaning in a few short words... always a pleasure to read your work... My work usally comes from my past...but it make me apreciate today.... luv to you... Michael

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/7/2012 2:09:00 PM

Ha ha, yes, I covet chocolate that's for sure! I imagine a lot of people, even diabetics really love chocolate! Thank goodness they do have sugar free chocolate for those diabetics who really love chocolate! That's only fair! I loved your footles you've written, Great Work!!

Valentine Chocolate and the Diabetic

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