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Valentine Memory

From a hospice bed
To a special dinner date
And a wet Red Rose 

I hold in my heart 
The memory of that night
My Rose bush still blooms

In my night garden
My Rose bush exudes that night 
My heart is embraced

A gentle rain falls
Creating weepy puddles 
Reflective mirrors


© Brenda V Northeast 6th Feb. 2012

Copyright © Brenda Victoria Northeast | Year Posted 2012

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Terry L. Allen Date: 4/29/2012 6:18:00 AM How lovely. Sounds like it was a very special Valentines. May your zest for life ligh your way in life. TLee Login to Reply Brenda Victoria Northeast Date: 4/29/2012 6:24:00 AM Thank you Terry- His memory lives on in heart, blessings, Bren

Kim Merryman Date: 2/5/2012 10:12:00 AM A beautiful story in haiku. Enjoyed these, Brenda. Love, Kim Login to Reply Brenda Victoria Northeast Date: 2/7/2012 4:39:00 AM Thank you Kim, appreciate you, blessings, Bren

Karen Deeks Date: 2/5/2012 12:09:00 AM Absolutely gorgeous! I like how you tell part of your memories but leave the rest open for interpretation. The last section is my favourite as it suggests much but delicately Thank you Karen Login to Reply Brenda Victoria Northeast Date: 2/5/2012 2:19:00 AM Thank you Karen inspiring comment, love, Brenda: )

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 2/4/2012 11:51:00 PM I could never tire of such a beautiful love story especially one penned so well. A memory to be cherished. Blessings, Rhonda Login to Reply Brenda Victoria Northeast Date: 2/5/2012 2:20:00 AM Thank you Rhonda for such a kind comment, love and blessings, Brenda : )

Russell Sivey Date: 2/4/2012 11:41:00 PM All of the Haiku fit in nicely! I really enjoyed reading them this fine evening! I especially like the rose interjections, very nice! What a spectacular write my friend! Great Work!! Login to Reply Brenda Victoria Northeast Date: 2/4/2012 11:44:00 PM Thank you so much Russell your a very dear friend on here who supports everyone so helpfully, you are much appreciated, love, brenda : )