Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Poet Senryu

Valentine

Your love embraced me.
Streamline muscles rippling.
Strong and statuesque –

Sweet mesmerizing
Steele gray eyes that melt my heart.
Pierced my resistance.

Every tomorrow
We two became one essence.
Forever converged. 

© February 2, 2011
Dane Smith-Johnsen

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Carol Sunshine Brown February 24, 2011 at 10:44 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Dane Ann. Love, Carol

Michael J. Falotico February 18, 2011 at 4:55 AM Congrats my dear poet friend....always Michael

Dr Hitendra Mehta February 18, 2011 at 12:06 AM Many Congrats Dane for big win in Linda's contest thru' this creative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Elaine George February 17, 2011 at 11:44 PM Beautiful Senryu, dear Dane Ann. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

Robert A. Dufresne February 17, 2011 at 4:43 PM great poem Dane ann. I looked in the morror ...but nope....guess it ain't me. Congratulations to you

Andrea Dietrich February 17, 2011 at 2:02 PM Ohhh, this one is very nice! congratulations,Dane Ann

Wilma Neels February 17, 2011 at 11:46 AM I love the last one DA ;-) congratulations on your win in Linda's contest.. Love Wilma

Kash Poet February 17, 2011 at 11:23 AM Congrats Dane on your well deserved big win in this contest of Linda!--kashinath

Sharon Ruebel February 17, 2011 at 9:47 AM Hello Dane Ann, Beautiful and passionate beyond all words Love this Dane Ann Congratulations on your win As Always, Shar

Audrey Haick February 17, 2011 at 9:36 AM Congratulations on your very fine 4th Place win in the contest, Dane Ann. Always, Annalise

Nette Onclaud February 16, 2011 at 8:58 PM my best CHEERS for the superb win, dane.. lovely! :) huggs, nette

Tahera Mannan February 16, 2011 at 7:51 PM Beautiful convergence. Many congrats for this huge win.

John Freeman February 16, 2011 at 7:09 PM Congratulations Dane on your worthy poem's win near the top. Agape, Moses

Robert Pettit February 16, 2011 at 6:35 PM Dane Ann, these senryu entries are well written. Congratulations on winning in Linda's contest with them.

Dr.Ram Mehta February 16, 2011 at 5:52 PM Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of Linda, Dane

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 16, 2011 at 5:32 PM Congrats Dane Ann on your success in my contest luv.. thankxx for your constant support always...

Jimmy Anderson February 3, 2011 at 12:14 PM Wow this is one hot poem...good luck in the contest...Jimmy

Andrea Dietrich February 2, 2011 at 11:23 PM Awesome!