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Valentine

Your love embraced me.
Streamline muscles rippling.
Strong and statuesque –

Sweet mesmerizing
Steele gray eyes that melt my heart.
Pierced my resistance.

Every tomorrow
We two became one essence.
Forever converged. 

© February 2, 2011
Dane Smith-Johnsen

Copyright © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen | Year Posted 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 2/24/2011 10:44:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Dane Ann. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 2/18/2011 4:55:00 AM Congrats my dear poet friend....always Michael Login to Reply

Dr Hitendra Mehta Date: 2/18/2011 12:06:00 AM Many Congrats Dane for big win in Linda's contest thru' this creative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 2/17/2011 11:44:00 PM Beautiful Senryu, dear Dane Ann. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie Login to Reply

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 2/17/2011 4:43:00 PM great poem Dane ann. I looked in the morror ...but nope....guess it ain't me. Congratulations to you Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/17/2011 2:02:00 PM Ohhh, this one is very nice! congratulations,Dane Ann Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 2/17/2011 11:46:00 AM I love the last one DA ;-) congratulations on your win in Linda's contest.. Love Wilma Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 2/17/2011 11:23:00 AM Congrats Dane on your well deserved big win in this contest of Linda!--kashinath Login to Reply

Sharon Ruebel Date: 2/17/2011 9:47:00 AM Hello Dane Ann, Beautiful and passionate beyond all words Love this Dane Ann Congratulations on your win As Always, Shar Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 2/17/2011 9:36:00 AM Congratulations on your very fine 4th Place win in the contest, Dane Ann. Always, Annalise Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 2/16/2011 8:58:00 PM my best CHEERS for the superb win, dane.. lovely! :) huggs, nette Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 2/16/2011 7:51:00 PM Beautiful convergence. Many congrats for this huge win. Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 2/16/2011 7:09:00 PM Congratulations Dane on your worthy poem's win near the top. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 2/16/2011 6:35:00 PM Dane Ann, these senryu entries are well written. Congratulations on winning in Linda's contest with them. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 2/16/2011 5:52:00 PM Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of Linda, Dane Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/16/2011 5:32:00 PM Congrats Dane Ann on your success in my contest luv.. thankxx for your constant support always... Login to Reply

Jimmy Anderson Date: 2/3/2011 12:14:00 PM Wow this is one hot poem...good luck in the contest...Jimmy Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/2/2011 11:23:00 PM Awesome! Login to Reply