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Valentine

Your love embraced me. Streamline muscles rippling. Strong and statuesque – Sweet mesmerizing Steele gray eyes that melt my heart. Pierced my resistance. Every tomorrow We two became one essence. Forever converged. © February 2, 2011 Dane Smith-Johnsen

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Date: 2/24/2011 10:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Dane Ann. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/18/2011 4:55:00 AM
Congrats my dear poet friend....always Michael
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Date: 2/18/2011 12:06:00 AM
Many Congrats Dane for big win in Linda's contest thru' this creative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 2/17/2011 11:44:00 PM
Beautiful Senryu, dear Dane Ann. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 2/17/2011 4:43:00 PM
great poem Dane ann. I looked in the morror ...but nope....guess it ain't me. Congratulations to you
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Date: 2/17/2011 2:02:00 PM
Ohhh, this one is very nice! congratulations,Dane Ann
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Date: 2/17/2011 11:46:00 AM
I love the last one DA ;-) congratulations on your win in Linda's contest.. Love Wilma
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Date: 2/17/2011 11:23:00 AM
Congrats Dane on your well deserved big win in this contest of Linda!--kashinath
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Date: 2/17/2011 9:47:00 AM
Hello Dane Ann, Beautiful and passionate beyond all words Love this Dane Ann Congratulations on your win As Always, Shar
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Date: 2/17/2011 9:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your very fine 4th Place win in the contest, Dane Ann. Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/16/2011 8:58:00 PM
my best CHEERS for the superb win, dane.. lovely! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/16/2011 7:51:00 PM
Beautiful convergence. Many congrats for this huge win.
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Date: 2/16/2011 7:09:00 PM
Congratulations Dane on your worthy poem's win near the top. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/16/2011 6:35:00 PM
Dane Ann, these senryu entries are well written. Congratulations on winning in Linda's contest with them.
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Date: 2/16/2011 5:52:00 PM
Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of Linda, Dane
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Date: 2/16/2011 5:32:00 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on your success in my contest luv.. thankxx for your constant support always...
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Date: 2/3/2011 12:14:00 PM
Wow this is one hot poem...good luck in the contest...Jimmy
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Date: 2/2/2011 11:23:00 PM
Awesome!
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