Eileen Manassian Poet Iambic Pentameter

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Valentine 1rst Place Contest Win of 2015

In Room Enclosed, We Travel

This Valentine, my love, will be divine
I’ll whisk you off to every place and clime
In room enclosed, we’ll travel round the globe
Enchantment waits for us as we disrobe

You'll lay me down on sandy island shore
“Pretend” our game, adventure calls for more
With sweetness on your lips, mine own you'll kiss
A taste that rivals chocolate from the Swiss

I'll whisper tales of wild Arabian Nights
And plop into your mouth Turkish Delights
I'll play the part of harem girl, then maid
Then Warrior Princess come your heart to raid

I’ll shower you with kisses, sweet and wet
And make you lose your clothes on poker bet
Those Vegas lights will twinkle in my eyes
Then off to masquerade in a disguise

Our bodies fuse on our gondola dream
We skinny dip into Venetian stream 
The scented candles dim and light peeks in
Your glow, my love, your scent is on my skin

The world is you; you are my every place
There is no beauty finer than your face
This very room where you've made love to me
Is paradise and where I long to be

January 22, 2015
For Mystic Rose's Valentine Contest
First Place Win

Felt like sharing this one. You can find the original poem here:

http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/in_room_enclosed,_we_travel_635231

The contest theme was to speak of love in any exotic place around the round the world...I enjoyed writing this piece. Hope you enjoy reading it! :)

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Richard Lamoureux May 1, 2016 at 7:57 AM Definitely worth reading again! Eileen Manassian May 9, 2016 at 3:05 PM Thank you....you make me so happy when you read my oldest writes.

Laura Leiser February 12, 2016 at 3:15 PM Your poetry drips with sensuous, passionate love, dear Eileen! Excellent magnificence! Thanks for sharing:) Eileen Manassian February 12, 2016 at 3:55 PM You are kind, dear. Thank you. I knew what Mystic Rose was looking for and I played up to her theme. I enjoyed the write and put my heart and soul in it. Thanks for the visit. Hugs

Paul Callus February 11, 2016 at 3:29 PM So very pleased to be reading this lovely poem again, Eileen! Its still clear in my mind; we were supposed to make a kind of booking on this one, if I'm not mistaken:) hugs // paul

Richard Lamoureux February 10, 2016 at 3:02 PM This ooh la la hotness puts me in a valentine state of mind. The judge has excellent taste.

Demetrios Trifiatis February 10, 2016 at 5:23 AM If Valentines were like that I wished all days Valentine's day to be! A superb writing dear Eileen!

Timothy Hicks February 9, 2016 at 11:25 PM Delicious and romantic from beginning to end. Loved the creativity and the sense of adventure in this piece. And you mention Arabian Nights which is also a plus! I remember reading that book ... it was quite unique with it's stories-within-stories-within-stories theme. Congrats on the well-deserved win!