Valentine

We both are found,
my love and I,
with our feet on the ground,
yet our hearts fly.
For twenty years we've walked this line,
still finding in each other, our Valentine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Robbins Aka Gonzo Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 11:16 AM
short and sweet just a strong and simple write a truely great read and perfect write
Fraser Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 8:56 AM
Lovely poem Robert, sweetness and love >> James
Dietrich Avatar
January 16, 2010 at 2:21 PM
Very sweet and well written. any wife would love it!! Luv, andrea
Austin Avatar
January 16, 2010 at 8:22 AM
You are blessed. So am I - 58 years married to the same woman. I like this one mucho. Love, daver
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
January 15, 2010 at 3:30 AM
What a lovely Valentine Rhyme this is, Robert. You both are lucky to have such a long and loving life together. Love to you and yours. Smiling, Dane Ann
Meade Stephenson Avatar
January 13, 2010 at 5:45 PM
A wonderful testament to your true love Robert....20 years is a long time and to still feel that way it must be an awesome feeling!!! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my works. Your wonderfully kind comments and words of encouragement are much appreciated! God Bless~Mary
George   Avatar
January 13, 2010 at 3:04 AM
Robert! this is awesome, both the poem and the fact that you both feel that way after 2o years - a testimony to the power of true love. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your kind comments. Lainie
Culverhouse Avatar
January 13, 2010 at 2:52 AM
very beautiful poem, there is a contest for who love's ya, it would be a great entry.
Haick Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 7:01 AM
Awesome Rhyme and beautiful story, Robert! Goes to my favs! God bless you both and continue to love and care for each other. Thank you for your kind comments on my poems! Peace, Audrey
Kendrick Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 4:25 AM
This is so romantic. I hope that your love enjoys it. So thoughtful of you to write it. Keep the romantic pen flowing. Sara
Brown Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 3:55 AM
I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this morning Robert. Thank you so much for sharing it with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
Clark Avatar
January 11, 2010 at 4:51 PM
Now make a big red heart and paste this inside........It is BEAUTIFUL!!!! Love Jeralynn
Devonshire Avatar
January 11, 2010 at 2:39 PM
You have found true love, Robert. I hope it stays as you describe forever. Beautiful writing here! Many would be envious of the love you share. It's a treasure that needs to be nourished and protected. Very moving poem! Love, Carolyn
K. Avatar
January 11, 2010 at 10:24 AM
Lucky you! And wishing you more years with your Valentine :) Enjoyed this read :) Thanks for your comments on my poems :)
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