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Yet in the plane, a bitter taste in my mouth, my heart beat risen, everything getting even worse -- the feeling of escaping. Escape to know a whole new world, from leaving my dusty country boots, changing my culture, language, sceneries, people but mostly, taking off the mask of a girl and changing it for a woman's. A woman without parents, friends, siblings, A woman alone in the big apple. I left my little South American city, Valdivia, arrived to the world's cosmopolitan capital. I changed my rural roads, covered in dust for streets with thousands of modern vehicles. The wooden houses were now impressive buildings, and the echo of a flummox 2009 got sometimes confused with millions of voices, accents, faces, skin colors, souls. It was a year spent in the most popular city where countries around the world meet as brothers where avenues separate china from Italy and where a huge park looked like home. For a whole year green trees were changed for green signs, People -- walking souls -- always in a rush It was New York the city where my memories were left and it is Valdivia were I bring them back.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/4/2010 9:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Ruth. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/4/2010 3:58:00 AM
This is raw gritty poetry one of the best pieces ive read in a while and I read a lot ... brava and applause thank you for sharing the big Apple congrates on being featured this week thorughly enjoyed the read love Jayne
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Date: 10/3/2010 5:19:00 PM
excellent words again thank you [duncan]
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Date: 10/1/2010 12:38:00 PM
Ruth, this is the best transition poem I have read in while. It is not only inspiring, but may cause a whole genre of writing that produces honesty a product of comparison across the global spectrum of views. Welcome to Poetrysoup, I would be honored to have you as friend, drop in anytime my talented friend.
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Date: 10/1/2010 11:32:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, and lots of inspiration Ruth. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2010 11:10:00 AM
Very scenic write on travel..very enjoyed..Michael
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