Vagabond

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For: Vanish, Voyage, Veiled, Vagabond Words - Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France

The vagabond hears
a nomad's song,

his footsteps follow the wind,
seeking sweet freedom

in the fire of wanderlust,
burning chains

that would keep him bound
in the shadows of doubt;

under starlit sky and in morning light
the traveller finds solitary refuge

on the neverending road.

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Constance La France

Date: 4/7/2024 3:03:00 PM

Chetta, congratulations on your win in my contest with this splendid poem, hugs

Chetta Achara
Date: 4/7/2024 3:08:00 PM

Thank you.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/29/2024 8:43:00 PM

This is a beautiful poem that seems to highlight freedom of individuality. "the traveler finds solitary refuge" gives me peace of mind. Good luck with the contest.

Chetta Achara
Date: 3/30/2024 3:12:00 PM

Thank you.

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 3/29/2024 3:17:00 PM

Lovely wanderer you captured the space in time wow many blessings enjoyed your work.

Chetta Achara
Date: 3/30/2024 3:11:00 PM

Thank you.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/29/2024 9:28:00 AM

Hello Chetta, I liked how you captured the restless spirit of the wanderer, yearning for freedom and liberation from earthly constraints. I also liked how your scenes lay out the nomadic journey, where each step is a pursuit of self-discovery amidst the vast expanse of the world. Through your words, I feel the exhilaration of breaking free from the chains of doubt and embracing the boundless possibilities of the open road. Truly inspiring. - Blessings, Daniel

Chetta Achara
Date: 3/29/2024 9:56:00 AM

Thank you. Your words of encouragement for me to continue my journey of poetry.