Vacuum

The echoes
of children's giggles
and laughter in the night
have long died down;

the house
has become unbearably hollow,
as though the very life of it
has just been sucked out;

once again,
it has become a cage 
seeking a bird that hasn't lost
its throaty song.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Richards Avatar
July 22, 2008 at 5:49 PM
I can relate to that empty house, and how difficult to adjust when they have grown and left the nest. The empty chairs at the dinner table, the sound of the doors slamming, and the daily blessing of knowing they are tucked in bed at night. This poem is a beautiful, yet sad tribute to children growing up. Great write! Love, Carrie
Naces Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 10:14 PM
Thanks, Carrie.
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