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Vacuous

submerged in blankness helpless to escape bereavement frail and broken, hollow eyed hope is a remnant the burden of countless tears lines etched deeply in her face.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/29/2017 10:38:00 PM
A very profound poem Gloria. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Date: 5/3/2017 3:28:00 AM
Beautiful Sedoka, expressing beautifully the emotions and pain..... Welcome to PoetrySoup (sending you a Soup Mail)
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Gloria Ames
Date: 5/3/2017 6:17:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words.
Date: 5/2/2017 5:54:00 PM
thank you for sharing poet
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Gloria Ames
Date: 5/3/2017 6:18:00 PM
Thank you for reading it.