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Vacations are for me Vampires no want to see Valleys pretty flowers Value is what I want Vacuum maid for me Vanilla in coffee Vegetable dinner Date Written: 5/5/2021 4 Place Six Syllables Pleiades V Poetry Contest Poetry Contest Deadline: Saturday, June 5, 2021 Sponsored by: Kim Merryman

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/9/2021 4:39:00 PM

Cute. Congrats for your win

Paul Callus

Date: 5/9/2021 3:00:00 AM

What a cute poem, Paula! You deserve to enjoy your vacations ...but best to avoid haunted castle hotels!! :) Congratulations on your fine win. Best regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/9/2021 12:20:00 PM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like my "V" vacations. It is an honor to have a win. Yes, no haunted castle hotels for me. Have blessed day writing away...................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/8/2021 12:16:00 PM

- Interesting, Paula ... vanilla in coffee I have to try it ... probably too sweet for me :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/9/2021 12:18:00 PM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like my "V" vacations. It is an honor to have a win. They make a vanilla creamer and that does have sugar in it. As a rule, plain vanilla does not have sugar in it. Glad to see you back. Have blessed day writing away with hugs...................

Kim Merryman

Date: 5/8/2021 7:59:00 AM

Paula, your second line cracked me up! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/9/2021 12:14:00 PM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like my "V" vacations. I am also glad my second line cracked you up. I love to make people happy/smile. It is an honor to have a win in your fun contest. Have blessed day writing away...................

Brian Sambourne

Date: 5/5/2021 5:36:00 PM

Yes, vanilla in coffee. Valleys full of blooms. I can relate. Enjoyed your submission, Paula. Be well. Cheers, Brian

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/6/2021 9:19:00 AM

Thank for writing. Glad you like my vacations with vanilla in the coffee. Wish I took see the valleys full of blooms on a trip. Have a blessed day.................

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/5/2021 12:48:00 PM

Nice my friend! Sounds like a great vacation! Blessings and a hug!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/6/2021 9:16:00 AM

Thank for writing. Glad you like my fun vacations. Wish I could run away on a trip. Have a blessed day........................

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/5/2021 12:04:00 PM

Hello Paula,It sounds like a perfect vacation to me. Hugs Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/6/2021 11:42:00 AM

Hello Paula, it made me feel like a vacation. Hugs Darlene

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/6/2021 9:15:00 AM

Thank for writing. Glad you like my vacations. Wish I took take one. Have a blessed day with hugs.................