Vacation Close To Home

Once upon time, come every summer
Vacation travel was so much funner
Now I must stay close to home
Share with my dog a bone
O man, life today, what a bummer!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Horne Avatar
May 5, 2013 at 4:20 PM
lol, I know the feeling, my friend. Hope you are much better xx
Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 9:41 AM
VERY Good. Congratulations, Audrey! LUv, andrea
Green Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 9:24 AM
HAHHA! Like this one! Congrats on your win!
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June 13, 2010 at 3:58 AM
Hehe, made me chuckle. As long as we don't start taking the bone from the dog. Many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest >> James
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June 12, 2010 at 8:33 PM
Congratulations, Audrey on your worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses
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June 12, 2010 at 8:43 AM
Congrats my BBF on your winning poem in the Limerick contest .. this is truly a fun read and so true..your last line tells it all ..enjoy another great win.. well deserved.. with luv your BBF Linda-Marie
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June 12, 2010 at 8:35 AM
Does your dog have a bone he can share with me? I won't be able to take a vacation either this year, Audrey. Congratulations on your win. There were many super Souper entries! Love, Carolyn
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June 11, 2010 at 9:58 AM
very impressive Audrey, truly came with a small chuckle how you put this in to a poem. Hope it is just a limerick for some silly contest, after all you are a wonderful person. Take care,..p.d.
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June 11, 2010 at 9:21 AM
another dog person - l luv it. nice writing. thanks, chuck
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