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Vacation Close To Home

Once upon time, come every summer Vacation travel was so much funner Now I must stay close to home Share with my dog a bone O man, life today, what a bummer!

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Jack Horne

Date: 5/5/2013 4:20:00 PM

lol, I know the feeling, my friend. Hope you are much better xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/18/2010 9:41:00 AM

VERY Good. Congratulations, Audrey! LUv, andrea

Amy Green

Date: 6/13/2010 9:24:00 AM

HAHHA! Like this one! Congrats on your win!

James Fraser

Date: 6/13/2010 3:58:00 AM

Hehe, made me chuckle. As long as we don't start taking the bone from the dog. Many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest >> James

John Freeman

Date: 6/12/2010 8:33:00 PM

Congratulations, Audrey on your worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/12/2010 8:43:00 AM

Congrats my BBF on your winning poem in the Limerick contest .. this is truly a fun read and so true..your last line tells it all ..enjoy another great win.. well deserved.. with luv your BBF Linda-Marie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/12/2010 8:35:00 AM

Does your dog have a bone he can share with me? I won't be able to take a vacation either this year, Audrey. Congratulations on your win. There were many super Souper entries! Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/11/2010 9:58:00 AM

very impressive Audrey, truly came with a small chuckle how you put this in to a poem. Hope it is just a limerick for some silly contest, after all you are a wonderful person. Take care,..p.d.

Chuck Keys

Date: 6/11/2010 9:21:00 AM

another dog person - l luv it. nice writing. thanks, chuck