Vacation At the River

River never sleeps by the city, nightlights highlight the dance craze faze of evening party-goers upon blue waves; swimmers sailboats descend during days. Time speeds by as children thrill yelling splashing elation-filled river walk’s, shopping sprees raking in green dollar bills; folks enjoying summer grills, need tummy pills by vacation’s end.

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Date: 8/22/2020 11:48:00 AM
I am so ready for another vacation like this for all of us - the "tummy pills" will be worth the fun!
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Date: 8/13/2020 10:15:00 AM
People of all ages enjoy being near water , I dont know what it is, but the excitement it holds is bubbly, playful and thrilling - you depict a river so cleverly bringing joy to so many! Blessings and hugs my friend. Jennifer.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/13/2020 3:29:00 PM
Thanks Jennifer.
Date: 8/1/2020 7:16:00 AM
Really liked this brings back so many memories. PR
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/13/2020 3:30:00 PM
Thank you Panagiota.
Date: 7/27/2020 5:26:00 PM
Tummy pills, eh?! Ha, ha. Such a cute description fits like a glove on this cute, nostalgic write!... This year so many are taking 'virtual trips.' Can't compare, I say. (Except when you're talking price. And who wants to quibble about price when on a vacation!). Cheers, Gershon
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/13/2020 3:30:00 PM
You have a point, thanks Gershon and stay well.
Date: 7/27/2020 3:34:00 PM
Enjoyed your depiction of frolic on the river--beautifully done, MLK.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/13/2020 3:30:00 PM
Thanks so much Vijay.
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