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Vacation

Mother Father kids Brainstorm vacation voyage Car railway or plane Entry in Brian's "Poetry of the Noun-Haiku" Contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2010 7:09:00 PM

Hey here is one of yours I'd missed. I really like it! As for my email, it's wordwarrior55@hotmail.com. Hope you'll write me there so I can get yours! LUv, andrea

Monte Banner

Date: 1/24/2010 6:46:00 PM

While im not this type of writer at all, people who do have a taste for these cant get quite deep. I respect it. I feel like...no matter where or how you get there, or your dream or aspirations everyone comes from the same process. Your kinda great.

Linda Witt-King

Date: 1/20/2010 11:27:00 PM

Well done, Audrey. Isn't this Haiku form fun?...and challenging!

Billy Thekidster

Date: 1/20/2010 12:00:00 PM

Family vacations I'll never forget. Especially my constantly asking, "Are we there yet?" Great Write Audrey. Best Wishes Always, Bill

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 1/19/2010 11:21:00 PM

May I join you in your vacation ? :) Promising fun for the family. Good luck in Brian's contest. Love, Iolanda

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/19/2010 5:18:00 PM

action packed vacation Haiku with no action verbs! Cool! like it alot! -Robert

Elaine George

Date: 1/19/2010 4:53:00 PM

Real good one, Audrey. Best wishes in Brian's contest and thank you for once again sharing your amazing poetic talent. Love, Lainie

Marty Owens

Date: 1/18/2010 10:58:00 AM

Love this...good luck in the contest...Marty

Brian Strand

Date: 1/17/2010 11:40:00 PM

Thank you for supporting my contest Audrey.Rgds Brian

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/17/2010 7:28:00 PM

WOW is all I can say Audrey.. great entry for the contest... hard to think of writing without certain words especially verbs... u have a winner here... so good to say hi for a few minutes before I get back to the trial this coming week... hope it will be over by this Friday and then I will return to Soup full time again.... great hearing from u .. so good to know my friends still think of me even when I am limited to comment on all their beautiful poetry .. this one has my vote... talk soon luv

James Fraser

Date: 1/17/2010 2:26:00 PM

Kool Haiku Audrey, good luck in Brian's contest >> Soup Mail 4 u >> James

Sean Kelly

Date: 1/17/2010 1:33:00 PM

This new one ain't easy , but you have done really well . Now how do we keep those kids quiet ; are we there yet ; are we there yet ; are we there yet ?????? . best of luck in the contest , Audrey ....

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/17/2010 1:26:00 PM

Good luck with this entry in Brian's contest. Sounds like it should be in the winner's circle. Sara

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/17/2010 1:20:00 PM

I have not seen this contest, I will check it out.