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Vacation

shadows on water
cottony clouds overhead
peaceful vacation
low hum of conversation
loving couples on the beach

written January 4, 2022

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Mike Gentile

January 13, 2022 at 11:05 AM

You've captured the essence for me Milt!!!

L Milton Hankins

January 13, 2022 at 11:07 AM

I'm glad you enjoyed the poem, Mike. It was a wonderful vacation experience.

Caren Krutsinger

January 13, 2022 at 8:25 AM

I feel like I am there seeing these loving couples.

L Milton Hankins

January 13, 2022 at 8:46 AM

Ah, that's the effect I was looking for.

Shirley Hawkins

January 12, 2022 at 8:27 PM

That should make you feel rested and well, Milt.

L Milton Hankins

January 12, 2022 at 9:35 PM

It was a good two weeks, Shirley. But, I did miss my Poetry Soup!

Jan Allison

January 12, 2022 at 11:48 AM

what fabulous imagery I could do with escaping the cold wet dark british weather, so glad you are back I have missed you and Happy New Year:-) hugs Jan xx

L Milton Hankins

January 12, 2022 at 11:57 AM

Aw, thanks, Jan. I have missed you, too. I hope your muse is awakening in this New Year. Happy New Year to you, too.

Charles Messina

January 12, 2022 at 10:53 AM

Sounds like a great vacation, Milton. Where and when are we going (lol) Nice write! -CM

L Milton Hankins

January 12, 2022 at 11:15 AM

Thanks, Charlie. I'm home now after a seven state swing through the south. I'm probably going back to Central Florida for a couple of weeks in February. You can come along, if you wish. My niece has a spare bedroom!

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