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Vacant Throne of Grace

crown of gold laid aside- abandoned throne of grace vacant...all for man! ~*~ * * * Note: #4 in a series of 24 Monokus reflecting the holy season of Christmas * * * * By: Audrey Carey Contest: "Amazing One Line" Sponsor: Constance La France

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Noel Villarosa

Date: 12/18/2010 2:50:00 AM

Congratulations, Audrey for your winning on this contest. (^_^) Noel.

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 12/16/2010 7:17:00 PM

Great Monoku here, dear Audrey. Congratulations on a well deserved win.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/16/2010 1:53:00 PM

Good one that tells your testimony..Congratulations on your win..Sara

Constance La France

Date: 12/15/2010 1:52:00 PM

Congrats on 2nd place in my contest, I have read some of your 24 Monokus for Christmas and they are all wonderful~~

Francine Roberts

Date: 12/15/2010 8:34:00 AM

beautiful Audrey, congrats on your win in the contest

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 12/15/2010 8:22:00 AM

Congrats, Audrey, on your win in the contest with this incisive write. Dan C

Eamon Duffin

Date: 12/15/2010 6:44:00 AM

Hi. Congratulations on your deserved win in the 'One Amazing Line', contest. Eamon

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/15/2010 3:38:00 AM

best wishes on your well-deserved award, audrey!! enjoy… nette

Tahera Mannan

Date: 12/14/2010 10:48:00 PM

Amazing one Audrey. Many congratulations dear friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2010 9:39:00 PM

A most wonderful message in your one line poem, Audrey. A BIG congratulations to you. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/14/2010 7:31:00 PM

Congrats Audrey on your super win in the One Liners contest with this eloquent line .. enjoy another top ten win my friend with luv..

John Freeman

Date: 12/14/2010 5:35:00 PM

Congratulations Audrey on a worthy for honor for second place. Agape, Moses

James Fraser

Date: 12/14/2010 1:49:00 PM

Many congratulations Audrey on your win in Constance's wonderful contest >> James :)

Deb Radke

Date: 12/14/2010 12:58:00 PM

Very well written. So much said in this one simple line. Congratulations on your win in the monoku contest.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/14/2010 5:24:00 AM

Congratulations Audrey on your win in Constance's "One Amazing Line" contest. Love, Carol

David Smalling

Date: 12/10/2010 9:46:00 AM

And that and more he paid ... and some have still not heard, but then perhaps they may word your words, and come flocking. Lovely, Audrey

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/8/2010 12:59:00 PM

Great ending, all for man. The redemption which is the gift of Christmas (and Easter!) Luv, Andrea

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 12/8/2010 9:26:00 AM

So much said here,dear sweet lady,I wish you the best of luck in the Contest!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/8/2010 3:50:00 AM

I am reading some very amazing and diverse poetry this morning. I am glad yours was among the poetry I was able to read today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us Audrey. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Holiday Season. Love,Carol

Charles Henderson

Date: 12/8/2010 1:05:00 AM

Very true Audrey. I'm going to have to practice on these more often. I love Japanese styly poetry.

David Byrne

Date: 12/7/2010 8:26:00 PM

Succinct!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/7/2010 10:24:00 AM

i drool over this gracious, descriptive monoku. audrey.. hope you enter this in the contest.. smashing... warmest, nette

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

Date: 12/7/2010 9:10:00 AM

So gracious Audrey... As are you... Well done. Lay

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/7/2010 9:00:00 AM

Nice thought well expressed , Audrey

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/7/2010 8:40:00 AM

Christ's willingness to exchange the "crown of gold" for a "crown of thorns" to save our souls is the definition of sacrifice, Dimples. I love all of your Christmas monokus! How will you decide which one to enter in Constance's contest? This one would be a great choice, dear friend. Thanks for you kind words on my wedding poem. He did get drunk and I had to carry him over the threshold after we had a near accident in the snow-covered roads. He's forever in my heart. Love you, Carolyn