Vacant Eyes


You've seen that look before,
so many times that you lost count
It's the look of hopelessness,
the look of despair
Vacant eyes that no longer care
Who let the emptiness in,
who stole their zest for life
Who squeezed the vitality out,
who removed their heart with a cold butcher's knife
Was this travesty done swift and surgically,
or perhaps it happened incrementally
Bit by bit,
drip by drip
Everything they every cared about
got clean ripped from their hands
Maybe they lost their kids
on a drunk driving holiday
Maybe lost the spouse,
when forgiving them was too hard a thing to pray
Maybe lost the house after losing the job
Whatever the reasons, former associates and friends shun them now,
because maybe they think that they're cursed with plain bad luck
Maybe having no family to speak of,
got them thinking life sucks
Down on their luck right now
would be a kind thing to say
But in their heart they know better,
for every sin committed, there's a pound of flesh to pay
So they wander around lifelessly
with that vacant look in their eye
Just wasting the time away until the day they die
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 12/4/2016 2:54:00 PM
Such realism written in a clear message that rips into the heart.. Truth about the dark of this world in which mankind sings in tune.. A7 and a fav, a very special fav -for it strikes me deeply..
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Date: 12/4/2016 12:25:00 AM
Sad and powerfully truthful, RW. Let's be careful out there.
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Date: 12/3/2016 7:50:00 PM
Very moving. These people need love not judgement. A well deserved 7 my friend.
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Date: 12/3/2016 5:37:00 PM
Hi Freddie, You have penned such a thought provoking write. As you so skillfully wrote many things can cause one to have "vacant eyes". Whatever the case is it's sad state to be in. Well done. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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