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Vacancies

on the wings of waking hours adrift in thoughts he’s the only one that can fill the vacancies of this mind lingering in the essence that he has become i tremble from depths within my soul i can feel his fingers tracing the edges of my existence his every breath rising with anticipation in whispers against flesh my pulse racing against the thrusts of time climaxing on the folds of night where dreams bring his kiss to awaiting lips ( simple bus scribbles)

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Date: 12/10/2019 9:07:00 PM
So very sensual Sandra. Your words paint a beautiful image in my mind. Thank you.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/11/2019 10:07:00 AM
Thank you so much Jeff...i am glad my images come through to the reader :)
Date: 12/10/2019 5:31:00 PM
Loved this sandy!;)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 6:57:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 12/10/2019 4:09:00 PM
Very nice indeed
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Date: 12/10/2019 6:57:00 PM
Thank you so much! :)
Date: 12/10/2019 3:46:00 PM
You fill the vacancy beautifully my friend--most don't have your gift of charming words, Sandy--drive safely my friend--but let the dreams be!
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Date: 12/10/2019 6:56:00 PM
Thank you so much Vijay...i always drive safe...i been doing this quite a few years...down time boredom allows for some musing time...i used to just let them go and try and remember them when i got home... now i either text the thoughts to myself and write when i get home, or if i am granted too much downtime i write them as i sit alone... hugs
Date: 12/10/2019 3:13:00 PM
Your bus seems to be 'driving' your muse! Wonderful piece-
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Date: 12/10/2019 6:54:00 PM
Thank you Michelle...i think so... sitting in a cold bus alone, waiting on the kids, just watching nature and trying to think of ways to find warmth certainly stirs the muse some days.. some good poems have come from my bus boredom :) hugs
Date: 12/10/2019 2:54:00 PM
Hi Sandra A dream you want to stay the whole night in. Thanks for sharing
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Date: 12/10/2019 6:52:00 PM
Thank you so much Greg... some dreams are worth lingering in for sure... hugs
Date: 12/10/2019 2:14:00 PM
Wow, that is certainly some bus! :) Sensually enticing and enchanting my friend. Sigh, this one sure does makes it's way straight to the heart of the reader. I am breathless at the moment. This is a dream I would never want to leave. Absolutely beautiful Sandy.
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Date: 12/10/2019 6:51:00 PM
Thank you so much Chris... the bus must have some kind of magical powers over my muse...it seems to draw the poetry out, although, it could be the boredom of sitting alone in a cold bus sometimes up to an hour...just staring at nature, looking for ways to keep warm... glad you enjoyed this one my friend... hugs
Date: 12/10/2019 2:09:00 PM
This could be a great spiritual piece except for the last two lines. Very lovely Sandra. : ) Happy holidays my friend! xxoo
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Date: 12/10/2019 6:48:00 PM
Thank you so much Connie...i almost ended it earlier in the poem but it felt incomplete ... Happy Holidays to you... hugs XoXo
Date: 12/10/2019 1:47:00 PM
WOW! Sis!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 6:47:00 PM
...thank you Bobby... :) hugs

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